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Comforting My Neighbor's Daughter Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/05/14

awesome story.

I really hope it continues.

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by Anonymous08/05/14

Keep it Going!

You are doing a good job of pulling us into your story!

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by DeborahAnne08/06/14

Waiting for more

I hope you end up fucking her mother too, sounds like she needs it just like her daughter. I read this a couple days ago just now got the chance to add my comment. I have an older lady living next door to me that I would love to give her oral pleasure and a little of my 7 inch cock too. But being a bisexual crossdresser I would not mind sucking off her 35 year old son who is living with her either.
da.cd@frontier.com

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by Anonymous08/08/14

MORE!!!! SOON!!!

I hope oyu continue the story soon, I hope it doesn't take a year for the next one. Very good story line and plot. One of my all time favorite shorter stories! Cant wait to read more

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by Anonymous08/09/14

So when does Chapter 4 arrive? Very good so far.

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by Anonymous08/09/14

Thanks 4 part 3

Hoping for more parts

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by maddict08/10/14

That's good work if you can get it. Please continue.

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by Anonymous08/16/14

exciting lovely

Loved all parts and hope more will continue very soon

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by vaboater08/24/14

Enjoying the stories. Looking forward to his comforting the neighbors wife and perhaps the wife and daughter together

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by Anonymous08/30/14

helping hand

It is always great when I get to help a young woman experience the true joys of sex, like "Cindy". However, helping a good girl wife, like "Debbie", can be just as rewarding!

Great series, so far! Please continue with a few more chapters! Your writing has been a pleasure for all of us (many wet panties and throbbing cocks for sure).

Lit member
Naughtydad469

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by DamianShep09/01/14

I enjoy your series very much!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
I hope he will have sex with her mother to comfort her and that she'll be understanding. I'd love to see them as a love triangle.

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by starwiz0109/09/14

totally thrilling

You have woven a wonderful story. And I am left wanting more.

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by Anonymous09/30/14

more need more

Please more I would like to see if the mom get in on the action. Great story.

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by Anonymous10/12/14

Please continue

Great story don't leave it too long for the next instalment

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by Anonymous10/20/14

Good series

Love the story I really hope you have more chapters soon..Mom really needs to get in on the action!

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by Alberta Al10/22/14

Excellent

I can't wait for the rest of this series.

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by mercianknight10/30/14

Enthralling

I was really torn between wanting our hero(?) to fuck the neglected mother or getting the daughter back on the scene. I think you handled it perfectly and left me with a cliff-hanger that I cannot wait to see how it all plays out.

Keep it up.

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by CalyPy11/05/14

Just perfect!

I know many wanted him to fuck the mother, but I really didn't want to... I was hopping he would find a way to leave... and was really crushed when he left the bathroom decided to fuck her... what a pleasant surprise when he found her asleep and Cindy came in time... 10 stars from me!

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by Anonymous11/09/14

How Unfortunate

I can easily understand Debbie's problem, with her husband David gone at the same time her husband John was going to be gone for a week. No wonder, with both of them gone, that she was trying to assure a steady supply of prick.

I had hoped for a 3-way when Cindy cane home, and expected it when Debbie woke up while he was fucking Cindy. Maybe in a future chapter.

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by Anonymous12/03/14

Hot Story

I hope you continue this series! Hot story, maybe you can get the daughter and mother together and add Dad to the orgy

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by madamnykki12/23/14

Great read keep writing

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by Dark_Storm12/30/14

Glad to see it continuing

I read what turned out to be the first chapter of this story ages ago and liked it a lot. I was pleasantly surprised to recently run across a link to this chapter and finding I had two new (to me, anyway) chapters to read. Chapters two & three did not disappoint and kept up the same great level of storytelling as in chapter one.

Needless to say, I'd love to see this series continued. There seem to be so many possibilities of where it could go. I would just hope that it isn't a year or more between any subsequent chapters and this one.

If it does take that long, I'd suggest, matt, that you reread what you have written before, to refresh your memory before writing the next installments. I saw two errors in continuity between chapters two and three.

The one that has been pointed out already by others is that, in chapters one and two, Debbie's husband is named "John", while in three, he's named "David".

The other lapse between two and three is that Cindy's mound is described as being shaved in chapter two, but in three, which happened later the same night, it is described as neatly trimmed.

I probably wouldn't have noticed these if I didn't reread chapter one and then move on to two and three all in one sitting, but they are unavoidable when reading the chapters in quick succession, as any new readers (and older returning fans, like me) would do.

One other thing that seemed to have changed--and not for the better-- is that in the first chapter, John was described as being a bit if a slob and a drunk, thus making Debbie into a sympathetic character. But, in chapter three, Debbie is portrayed as a drunk, herself, and thus lost any sympathy we readers may have had for her.

While I can see the reasoning for Chris to be fucking Cindy as her mother lay drunk and unconscious--to add a bit of titillation to the story--it went a bit far that he would have continued when Debbie woke up and started speaking to Cindy. Even if it was to get revenge for Cindy sucking him off, while he was on the phone with Debbie earlier in the day. If the couch back was low enough for Cindy to be bending over it, he certainly would have been clearly visible when Debbie came to and began talking to Cindy. He had more to lose by getting caught in the act, than Cindy did, yet he kept on plowing away, while standing directly behind her.

Other than that bit of awkwardness, I'm still enjoying this story and would like to see more added to it.

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by isabelle-2501/05/15

Great !

Amazing you had me soo wet!
Write some more!

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by Anonymous01/12/15

Go on, please

I just would like to tell you that I don't want the mom to get involved with him.
It's the easy way out and would be a cheap way to deal with a perfect story so far.
Thanks for sharing.

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by Anonymous01/18/15

Nice

Hope you finish the story it has a good start to it

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by Anonymous01/24/15

MORE PLEASE

know that dear man was worn out. he could have copped a feel or just a small taste to serve as an appetizer for the next chapture. none the less will look forward to the next chapter or chaptures, maybe with a 3some.

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by anonintexas199903/07/15

we need more

This deserves more

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by mandyrj8503/13/15

wow

Please please continue the story I can't get enough

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by mandyrj8503/13/15

More please these stories are hot I hope you keep writing

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by C_frommn04/04/15

Story

Was just getting into interesting times. Would Momma Bear give it up and would she share with her Daughter.And what about Poppa he might be out of shape but if he is spending a lot of time away. He has to have some kind of Recreation.

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by Anonymous04/05/15

Hot series!

DO give us more. I love how hot Cindy is for her neighbor.

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by Anonymous04/17/15

omg my pussy is driping wet from reading this series please add more

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by rightbank04/24/15

playing dangerously

and it could be costly.

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by Chuck1223905/08/15

Very very good

Another sequel please where you do Debbie. That is helping your neighbour. Debbie needs some comforting sex.

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by Taljinn05/13/15

Awesome, keep it up.

Great story, very hot. Also, glad you resisted turning this into the obvious mother-daughter three way that everyone else seems to immediately gravitate to in their stories. Would love to see a relationship develop in future stories. Again, awesome work.

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by Anonymous05/18/15

Wet Pussy

I fucked my older, much-married neighbor for one wet, hot, summer when I was 19. I was home from college - and he worked at night. As soon as my mom left for work, we hit the sheets. He had the biggest dick, and he made me cum again and again and again.I learned more from him than any man I fucked since. This story brings back memories. I may just give him a call.

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by WetworksQueen07/07/15

Hot

Good gods this is hot. When he is fucking her with her mother passed out right next to them ...wow. As much as i feel for Debbie and know she needs a good fucking I'm not sure how i would feel about them possibly getting together and I'm glad you didn't go there in this chapter.

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by Anonymous07/24/15

Perhaps Two for One?...Maybe?

This is definitely a hot story, packed with strong emotions fulfilling sexual needs by both neighbors. Truly a win - win love story with discovery, passion, and wild sex excitement.
A follow up chapter could include Cindy going off to college and Mr. Matthews following through by satisfying Cindy's mom, Debbie (on "a good neighbor basis") as she desires his full sexual attention. From here on out it will be any one's imagination for the grand finale!
Thoroughly enjoyed the characterization of Cindy's desires (her rejuvenation for sex) rekindled by Mr. Matthews patience and loving touch (in spite of his own desires).
Oh yes, I also agree Mr. Matthews took a wild chance in the living room with Cindy and her mom. At that point, I would have probably lost my erection to limp noodle( at least momentarily, if not a short heart attack!), UGH!, WHEW!, GULP! what next! LOL! That same incident almost happened to me and my girlfriend as her mom and dad had gone to bed.....and yes, later, her mom returned to the living room (for a clear shot inspection on us) where we were making good progress but still, fortunately had our clothes on. Whew! that was as close one!
Yes, definitely looking for more adventure in this story
My best to all,
Domfrancisco.

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by Anonymous08/04/15

please continue

Please Continue the Story.I would like to see where you take it. Thank You. I have enjoyed reading it.

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mmm.

Another brilliant story from you, I'm soaking wet from reading it, keep up the excellent work.

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by Anonymous08/14/15

that so hot

that was so hot you have to wright moer this one to see where it go's

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by rightbank09/30/15

that

was close

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by Anonymous10/13/15

Awesome

Would love to hear more and find out what happens next. Very fun to read.

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by Anonymous10/16/15

Hot Story!

The next segment needs to end with both Mother and Daughter getting pregnant by the Neighbor, then moving in with him to continue to be his subs, and Mothers of his children. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous10/17/15

Love the story

wish I had neighbors like that, Mmmmmm

Am confused though, (on top of the 2 husbands) how did Cindy come over after breaking up with the boyfriend, get seduced and have sex before the parents came by at 11PM -- then the same day he arrives to talk with Mom in the evening????

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by Anonymous10/26/15

love it

gods that was hot...

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by wdbtchr10/26/15

Loving it

I can't help being turned on by the though of this sweet young lady repeatedly filled with semen. The thought of her pregnancy excites me and I would love for mom to join in and get pregnant too. I'm having trouble keeping up with his conquests, nuts drained.

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by Anonymous11/01/15

love it

Continue this

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by Anonymous11/06/15

Too hot

Would love to see a chapter 4 :-) The story is just too good to stop now!

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by Anonymous11/28/15

mom. next¿??

Is Debbie next?? Do you have a story about them having a x??


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