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B'elanna and Seven Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/13/14

hot story

the other stories you wrote her romantic and sexy , this was just pure fucking hot, if i hadn't just been fucked i would of definitely needed to be fucked it was that hot and turned me on that much, keep up the writing of these stories cause i love them, meera.

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by Truesylver08/15/14

Nice

A little too short but I like it alot.

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by KenGore08/15/14

I'll try to make the next chapter longer

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by Sucker4Boobies01/16/15

Not bad

You had a great premise, but the story felt a bit rushed. My advice is to flesh-out the story a bit more, so that the readers can savor it. Good luck to you!

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