Housewarming Party

Utter crap

Total crap

I agree with the other comment. I don't understand why lit doesn't make a category for this kind of 'loving' stories.

Another pile of crap

Cuck erotica at its best

Crapola stinks

This is utter crap!!!! Keep the cucks off this catagory.

Literotica is an disgusting site!

Letting sick stories such as this (written by abnormal certifiably psychopaths such as this sorry excuse of a human being) be posted as LW. Asshole author and asshole site and asshole posters.

freaking idiot

My gf tried that, her and the guy would be out the fast, both of them messed up from me kicking the shit out of them. I agree with the other comments, keep this crap of culkholds off of here. Spineless dicks.

"Loving" Wives?

Firstly. The Literotica forum will tell you that "Loving Wives" is intended to be the category for cheating and cuckolding, etc. Seems badly named to me, but that the way it is.
I would have thought that willing cuckoldry should belong to a subsection of "Fetish", while other cheating probably belongs to "Erotic Encounters", but I know from experience that if you try and post such a story elsewhere, then the Literotica Moderators will move it into Loving Wives.
Secondly. Some people are turned on by the idea of their wives or partners fucking others, therefore there will be authors who will write to satisfy that fetish. Just because someone is writing in this genre does not necessarily mean that they either support or espouse such a lifestyle. Maybe this writer does, but maybe he doesn't.
So please don't have a go at the author for writing something that you don't agree with, and putting it in the category intended for just this kind of tale. If you don't like it, why are you reading in this genre, it doesn't make sense? Few of the previous comments have anything to say about the quality of the story itself, just about the subject.

LOL

This was a joke, right? Surely he told his "girlfriend" and Andrew, to turn out the lights and lock the front door as they were leaving. Reminding them to make sure the door didn't hit them in the ass as they were leaving.

Just What This Site Needs

Another one .Pretty bad.dapper

Facepalm

Here we go again.

I have a theory. Lots of people get off on being humiliated. It's a fairly "common" fetish as fetishes go. When those people write stories about their humiliation fetish, they purposely place them in Loving Wives, knowing they will be demeaned and humiliated.

All of you who write insulting comments to the author are simply feeding his fetish!

WTF

HEY ADMIN!! MIGHT IT NOT BE TIME TO START ANOTHER CATEGORY CALLED CUCKOLDS?!?!?!

OR BETTER YET, MAYBE THE AUTHORS WOULD GET A CLUE AND PUT THESE F#$%^@! STORIES IN THE FETISH SECTION AS THESE ARE WOMEN WHO DO NOT LOVE THERE SIGNIFICANT OTHERS!!!

Another Girly Mannn Writer!!!!

If you have to be one of those at least warn us in the description part so we don't waste OUR time reading this pathetic crap.

Please Literotica

Please add another category either gay husbands or willing cuckolds. This shit is just getting old. I cant take another faggy wimp story # 1

Hey Anony-mouse....

The basis of the story was simple, it was easy to tell where it was going. Just like if you don't care for what is on a channel of your TV and you change it, you can also quit reading a story and move on to something else.

Unless you are actually turned on and only howl because you feel guilty.

Lucky...

He was very lucky to find out in time, before marrying, what a cheating whore she was. All he have to do is to make his bag and return to the parents home. She could stay with the lover. Just 1 *, because he didn't do it the instant he said "stop" and she didn't stop.

Well that was stupid

First off - why is it posted in Loving Wives? They aren't married (thank goodness) so her actions are that of a single woman. Why would he accept her actions or her cremepie? And the good thing is that she is SO easy to dump. All it might cost you is a few dollars to break the lease. Boy is she going to be surprised to find that while she slept, you packed all your things and moved out! What a slut! Unfortunately there was nothing original, clever or entertaining about this drivel. The plot line was obvious and the sexual part wasn't erotic. Just not well done. I'd give you a negative score if it were possible.

re: Hey Anony-mouse....

1) By using "Hey Anony-mouse...." to target the comment rather than copying the comment title, you are posting an anonymous comment for someone posting an anonymous comment.

2) If you can tell what is in a story so early, it deserves to be trashed.

3) I noticed you didn’t say anything directly related to the story. You only trashed someone else for daring to have a different opinion. Of course, that’s an inference since, as I said, you couldn’t be bothered to actually comment on the story.

ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ! oops, fell asleep again, these stories are a great cure for insomnia!

So Hot!

Love this story!

Nice First Story

I see it was the first story you've posted. Nice job, and I look forward to more.

...and I've been reading Literotica for more than two weeks, so I know what to expect in the "Loving Wives" category.

Is it really even possible?

Can a woman (until recently, unwilling to do BJs) convert a straight heterosexual guy into a dedicated cream-pie eater in a few hours? Maybe (but just maybe) if she were already experienced in such conversions, but even then, this rapidity is daunting!

It seems to be based, in part, on the notion that some women are motivated to dominate their guy (including the use of humiliation). In another part, that there are SuperStuds who are better (absolutely confident, hung like Trigger, unencumbered by social or moral qualms, and capable of endless erections) than you or I.

I would welcome a Ch2 (on at least one of these tales) where, the next morning, Former Future Hubby explains to Sweetie that he found the whole apres-party experience to fit perfectly into her description of 'keeping the sex' in flux. Then, explain that HIS next experience was going to involve a woman who WOULD stop when he voiced the option offered by Sweetie! Then thank her for the lesson and all her work on HIS apartment!

2*

Almost original

What an original story(almost). I've only read about 2000 of these sick stories written by a sicko author. These are suffering from DUMBSHIT ITIS. The story takes as much talent as breathing.

A-Maze-Ing

Absolutely loved this story. Came so hard when she said "sorry...but...but...we can't stop now". Incredible.

Hope you write more like this one!

Only one thing you didn't mention. ..

After reading I see you didn't want to confess that this took place somewhere in the UK. But don't worry, we can figure that part out.

STOP!!!!!!!

As of right now you and Andy can have the apartment. I'll come get my stuff later.

Seriously? What a fucking tart.

Loved it. 3*

Are you fucking serious?

He should kill them both. Slowly. Painfully. Just like they killed his relationship with the slut/whore/bitch/cunt.

Just another sickening cuck, wimp story from cuckerotica!!!

1 star just another brit,cuck,fag story like all the rest! Pathetic!

Not so Bad

First Loving Wives is not a romance site; it's for cheating, slut wives etc.

Second criticism should be directed at the writing style, not venting about the writer's parentage because you don't like the subject matter.

Third I'd like the author to follow up as to whether the protagonist "mans up" or "wimps out" in this situation. Personally I'd prefer "mans up" and kicking the girlfriend out but that's me.

*

Nah.

Looks like another new one for "cuckerotica"

Anybody surprised? Why not change the name of the category, more fitting for what's being posted anymore. Another sicko writing for the cuckies of this site.

So surprise an other cuckold story

The thing that grates me more then the cuckold part is the lack of a finish. Damn it if your going write a story Finish the Fucking Story!
I wish we could mark a negative score for these unfinished stories.

Loved it

Let these morons hate all they want. It was well written and it was a great story. Dumbasses read a duck story then get mad cause it's a cuck story. Idiots have nothing better to do than to get on here and bash ratings. Get a life.

Cucks need a seperate catagory that way

People can choose to read that stuff if they wish.

A new class of story is needed!

There has been a huge increase in stupid cuck stories, along with a significant loss of good LW writers, so how about a new category of stories for the wuss inclined cuckold stories. That way, the rest of the readers of Lit.com would know to avoid reading these stories.

divorce time

Good story!!!

Congrats!

My wife

Wow!! That was hot. My wife and I are planning on a new home in the near future. I think I'd like to have our own unique housewarming party. We invite some big cock stud over and he screws my wife in every room!

Good Story, ....but it's another Cuck one

A good story that can lead to a sequel.
However it is another cuckold one perhaps the girlfriend can arrange for her boyfriend to fuck one of her pretty friends.
And for the evening she is a cuckquean !

I hope the BF does not end up being another cuck as we have dome many on this site.

Cuckolding heaven

I have been encouraging my wife to do something similar. It just feels so erotic. does George wants to clean up after the action?

Read it for what it is.

An unlikely tale. Where is it set? No clue from the author. However Brits do not say apartment (a flat), co-worker (colleague), or love seat for a two seat settee. (a love seat has two seats facing in opposite directions). On the other hand the perpetrator was not black and did not take her up the ass. Which seem to be the two chief american fetishes. So I do not know or care where it takes place.

time to transfer names on the brand new lease

and move on.

Chapter 2 Please!

I liked it. Continue this with George watching them in the bedroom :)

out of here

At least he isn't married to her and I would dump her in a heart beat if I were him. Elena will continue her slutty ways if they marry, why not, she will have George to support her while she finds as much pleasure elsewhere. Some friend Andrew turned out to be but he would of been a fool to turn down the free sex. Let Elena go before she gives you any number of STD's.

Yes, George and Elena love one another......

.....so much that she opts for a new lover on the eve of their celebrated housewarming.... Too bad he signed the lease. Maybe he can sublet his share to Andrew's big cock. Then Andrew can ride for free every night. When Elena gets pregnant, having forgotten all about her pills, she can blame George for not saying, "Stop" much, much sooner.
Of course, George won't have grown any cojones at all, since he's basically a complete pussy. Too bad he didn't tie them together and burn the place down while he went out for some groceries....that would have been far more fitting.

I see you forced the trolls to read your tale of cuckolding

Man, you have all that power to make trolls read your story when they do not want to. How do you do it? Anyway, it was a good story. Shy petite girl, comes out of her shell and starts to dress to impress. Likes the flirts, so she goes all the way and makes her cuckold even eat his first creampie. Sitting on his face, as she drains all that thick fresh hot seed for cuckold to eat and swallow. Then kicks him out of his own bed. lol What is next for cuckold? Chastity? Make him wear panties? I think the girl should hookup with a hung tranny to really learn how to dom her new cuckold. And all he had to do early on is say "stop". So once again, cuckold's fault. LOL

Great job

Great story. Love the set up. Love that she took her lover into the bedroom at the end and made George stay out. Hot. Hot. Hot.

lucky bastard

My girlfriend tried to get me mad and would tell me about the guys she would give head to and how she would fuck them. She always thought I would get mad and jealous but really I loved hearing about it. It was so Hot. Just wish she would have let me join or watch.

sucks

another fag trying to act straight

More!

Ignore the haters - this is a great storyline and hope you'll fill us in on what happens next with Andy, George, and Elena!