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Interesting
I'm enjoying it, but the chapters are annoyingly short.
Just awful
And had you posted it in Sci/Fi it STILL would have been wildly implausible and unbelievable. No stars.
make the chapters longer
Too short.
Not really chapters. The best I can give is a "keep writing" 3 *s.
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