Truth or Dare: Pushed to the Max

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make it your last

liked it

especially the peeing!

she went from inexperienced to a fisted slut dreaming of gangbangs that enjoys water ports all in less then 5 mins?please try this over by deleting it

need s story buildup

and time gee from no experience to full slut this would have been better in two short well paced chapters. first introducing peeping neighbour second catching neighbour and ending with an invite

sucks big time!

It's a terrible attempt at erotic writing, and I agree with all the negative comments posted. Way too much, way too fast. Way too kinky, too, but you warned us about that. Fiction trumps reality, eh?,no matter how unbelievable. Somebody with a hard-on can't pee; God designed us so as to prevent things like your story. He also knew that urine is poisonous.

Great!

Ignore the moronskies! This is great! When does the neighbor run the lawn mower over her hard nippled titties and bury her face first in an ant hill so the queen can give her mind commands? Then Max will become the true elephant God of old people.

So Bad!

So Bad I didn't even vote or finish reading.
One thing: Are you male? Have you ever tried pissing with a hard on? Almost imposible and more so inside a woman's pussy.

great !

this story is great ! don't listen to those other idiots. its your story so u write how u want !!

first

Make it your last

Terrible

Wow...that was actually awful. Appreciate the effort, but it was poorly written, didn't make sense, had no eroticism to it. And dude: pissing isn't the same as squirting. That's the basics.

loved it

Well written pretty easy to follow please write more :-D

Re: Not bad, with a bit more... polish..

if it was a 1st story, it was fairly good.. with a bit more polish, an some research, can be better...