I agree that this is (or could be) a great story. BUT...
You are dragging it out, at the rate you are going it will be about five more chapters and several more months. I guess I will run across it again, later. You might remember that this is a porn site and that a kiss between brother and sister is NOT the Mark of the Beast, LOL.
Ok I'm hooked. This is a great story. Please continue it I need to know what happens and fast. Very well written can't wait for more... literally
I agree that this is (or could be) a great story. BUT...
You are dragging it out, at the rate you are going it will be about five more chapters and several more months. I guess I will run across it again, later. You might remember that this is a porn site and that a kiss between brother and sister is NOT the Mark of the Beast, LOL.
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