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the "s" word
I vote to keep this story on the site. While I object most strenuously to the "n" word I have also, for about three decades refrained from using the "s" word, and encouraged others to see it as offensive as the "n" word. This is a story about domination and surrender. Period. In fact, it is a good story about d/s. Not great but I encourage readers to scan it again because, for a first posting, I think it has some excellent features. bluejacket01
Liked it
Even though it was not exactly non-con, he was there voluntarily. As for racism, who is assuming that one black sub may not get off on the same things that a white sub does? Isn't questioning that black guys have different feelings racist?
Technical Errors
The editor of this piece used spell check without taking time to use his/her eyes. More than one instance of a wrong word being used because it passed the automantic spell check
Examples: "...while I was shopping got groceries.", "...and prices himself on being a man's man." And that in just the first four paragraphs. "...He's almost to the edge of his organ" in the next to last paragraph.
Sorry, but this is not good writing and interferes with the story.
nice, but full of mistakes
A wonderful Femdom story, but very much littered with errors in typing, spelling, grammar and punctuation. This story is in need of editing.
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