All Comments on 'Military Man Pt. 01a'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great start ...

Was hoping part 2 was there already

ariesgirlariesgirlover 9 years ago

I hope Ava tell her dad about Julian. I know she don't want the media to get wind of it but she will be helping herself and anyone else that lunatic terrorizes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great start...

Ready for chapters 2, 3, and 4.

whitechicksonly619whitechicksonly619over 9 years ago
brilliant

Absolutely brilliant. Can't wait for the next chapter. So nice to read a story thatthat builds up to something. Not the typical thug fucking a bored wife....

jamesblkjamesblkabout 9 years ago
more,,,i want more... what happens next

come on can't end it there where is the rest, come on....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
hope...

you are well and able to continue this fine tale.

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