The Manager

forget the

Forget using all the "word -- word" garbage as removing makes the story far easier to read. That and all the ... do noting and are used improperly, get an editor or study a basic grammar book to learn how and when to use.

Well i liked it

I can't think what the other anonymous was on. The story premiss was good and it was well written.
Thank You for your time and effort, I certainly enjoyed it

Good SHit

Keep up the good work....

yummy

i loved it...very hot!! keep me cumming more please ;-)

Nice. Very tight and to the point, but with some insight into the characters as well. Good job here!