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Visitation Rights Pt. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Drbeamer333308/09/14

Loved it

Very nicely done. Five stars.

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by dmwriter08/10/14

Good first one

Painted an erotic picture with words but it ended too quickly. Next time draw it out like an orgasm you want to delay so the pleasure doesn't recede too quickly.

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by Anonymous08/10/14

Good & fast

This was paced just as it should be; fast. It was a quickee, plain & simple. Good story.

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by SweetDesire42708/11/14

Thank you!

I appreciate the kind words. It was meant to be a quickie and am glad that that came across.

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by seth613809/01/14

Nice

Nice job, I liked it a lot!

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