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Mind blown!!
Todd and Elizabeth? Did I miss some very early clues? I must have because I did not see that coming. Yikes! Her with Todd means an in to his trusted inner circle. Dear Me! Wonderfully written as usual! Thank you!!
tranzmany
Yes, I had to do something to keep you guys guessing. :-) So, did you get the solution right?
Thanks
Wifewatcher, You lovely lovely man. Thanks a heap. This the best gift ever- your epilogue was superb.
Todd and Elizabeth?
Her, I'm not surprised...I expected something like that from Liz...but Todd? Now, THAT was a revelation! In the matter of the Belle murder, I didn't consider coach Harlan due to his illness...
One again, my thanks go to this author that keeps bringing me back for MORE! And this, to me, is the mark of a good writer/novelist.
Solution
Yeah although I'll admit I didn't get it till Rose suggested that it was Seth that was the target. I was clutching on to the way the interview with the family went. I noted how the Sister and Cousin were suggesting a reason for the death and the way they led the parents along. Once Rose suggested the Set connection I finally understood the downward spiral Harlan had found himself on. The coach did murder Belle or try to kill Seth as a gift to Karen right? Since he was certainly going to die, right?
I have read this once before, other WifeWatchman stories, too.
I really don't like Crowbar being a willing cuckold to Laura or maybe they are just in an open marriage. An open marriage is OK, a willing cuckold I don't like. I guess I am just too old fashioned or not as much of a pervert as I thought I was. Otherwise a good story if a little confusing at times, too many players. Thank you for writing, WW.
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