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keep writing really liked the opening!
want to read more
Nice beginning
Definitely has me wanting to see more.
Putting you on my favs list so I don't miss future installments.
Great story
Thanks, was very disappointed that it was only one page.
Thanks for the encouragement
I have been thinking about this novella for some time now and I'm happy for the positive feedback so far. I'm still trying to get the hang of how many words equals one page here as this is my second submission to the site. I do hope that you will enjoy the rest of the series as it rolls out. Island chica
chapter 3...
... is up and chapter four is half done. Please read and comment and vote!
Thank you!
Islandchica
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