…and reeled me in at the end. A great story Zach. I can picture the whole scene…I'd love to have been there. Keep writing. It's refreshing to read a story with not only good grammar and spelling but depth and feeling. You have a talent. Please give us more! x
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Anonymous08/19/14
a poetic, eloquent, well-written piece. Thank you.
English
as always
Your way with words make quiver. Great story Zach.
Eloquently sexy
Sexy and evocative, beautifully descriptive, extremely arousing.
You had me from the start….
…and reeled me in at the end. A great story Zach. I can picture the whole scene…I'd love to have been there. Keep writing. It's refreshing to read a story with not only good grammar and spelling but depth and feeling. You have a talent. Please give us more! x
a poetic, eloquent, well-written piece. Thank you.
Very hot!
Spanking always does it for me, but I particularly enjoyed the imagery.
I can't add
much to what the previous commenters already said. It is a wonderful well written luscious scene.
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