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by HoneyAdored08/07/14

Serious stuff

Not an upright jerker to be seen
No struggles in your rope play
I could almost, but not quite, see a bungee if I squinted, ever so hard
An interesting piece
Noose work!

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by Ashesh908/07/14

Excellent !

this Poem could be referring to a Hangman's execution or a Paratrooper droppin' into Enemy territory or an Olympic Diving competitor [ or as HoneyA has so aptly put it a Bungee jump ] : 5-ed .

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by HoneyAdored08/07/14

@Ash

But did you see the sub, hogtied and suspended from the dungeon ceiling? Or would that be just me again? *adjusts glasses*

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by Ashesh908/08/14

HoneyA : Wow !! Perfect

Observation !!! Your perception is sharper than mine !! Attagal !!!

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