Fucking My Boss Ch. 01

Promising , But.....

A good start but too many typos and ended too soon . Keep at it !

Typos and bad grammar

you should read what you type before sending it

no background as too why she is so into being his office slut

READ SHOGUY

this story had potential---way too short and missing build-up....btw 6am??? eary for anything let alone business?? you need to read the writer shoguy--she has a bunch of stories on this hot topic....then get the pen out and write

not much of a story,, gave an ace for a lousy effort

I looked into his eyes and all i saw was pure lust and hunger. He read he'd down to my shirt and undid all my buttons and tossed my shirt away.
No idea at all what the fuck this sentence is
My guess would be,,, he reached down
If I undone all my buttons and tossed my shirt away , I would think I would go with it
I usually have to take my shirt off before i can toss it away

Another??

No base, nothing but a fuck, before the workers get there.