This is a fun great story! Well told and vivid! I loved it!--
You conveyed nicely a mix of lust, curiosity and excitement. Keep on writing!
This one ended too soon. What happened to Jen's story? What about her pree marriage escapades?
Have to say that was so fun i joined in. Orgasmic!
Having fun in the sun. A mutual masturbation scene is described with sly humour and raunchy detail.
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Super good!
This is a fun great story!
Well told and vivid!
I loved it!--
Juicy
You conveyed nicely a mix of lust, curiosity and excitement.
Keep on writing!
Too soon
This one ended too soon. What happened to Jen's story? What about her pree marriage escapades?
Erotically fun
Have to say that was so fun i joined in. Orgasmic!
Raunchy scene
Having fun in the sun. A mutual masturbation scene is described with sly humour and raunchy detail.
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Back to Show and Tell or
More submissions by Shysquirter.