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"The first black dude".....
A fittingly horrible way to end a terrible story. Bad story line, horribly written without a single decent character or clever thing about it.
enjoyed
creative story line. thought it and odd place to insert the gina story line, but didn't hurt overall. you should continue the story instead of ending here.
Yuck.
Whores married to gay cuckold, go away.
No Cuckold here.
This is probably in the wrong category, But I enjoy stories where couples realize that love making and sex are to different things. Even though she was not completely honest about her lesbian affairs their trust and honesty allowed them to enjoy multiple partners and experiences. I wonder if he truly would like to try a homosexual experience if put to him the right way. I enjoyed the story, I'll be looking for future writings. Thanx
My 2 cents worth,
I guess this story was always going to get more and more depraved and that's fine, each to there own. Also I think you write about sex very well but the story in both chapters jumps around a lot. It goes from present to past, to distant past then back to present. It makes the story stilted, affecting the flow and the enjoyment for the reader. Maybe you should try one of the volunteer editors to get a second opinion before you post. I gave both the chapters 4*
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