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Vicky Ch. 03

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by thebuffalo11/30/14

Excellently done. My only bitch is that, in places, it's starting to read like a senior high fantasy.

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by TimRailing12/01/14

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Thanks for the constructive criticism. I think it will diverge from that in Chapter five, let me know if not

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