The nerve of Janet to slink her behind back in town. It would be nice to get Janet's side. It appears she is guilty but why the sudden disappearance with no kind of note or anything. She could have at least let the kids know why.
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Anonymous08/11/14
Strange, unbelievable & mechanistic story
Gives up her WHOLE life and family for some strange?
Ah, I doubt it.....
The best revenge is living well, hooking up with Wifey's hotter sister, and having daughters that slam the door in Wifey's face when she tries to come back. LOL
This, ladies and gentlemen, is a JPB BTB tale. He does great ones, but always with a good twist to them. No revenge on Assholes this time around, except for Uncle Asshole who just wanted to cause trouble. No need for revenge on Wifey, either. Karma, one of my favorite bitches along with her sister Payback, took care of Wifey already.
5 HUGE Stars!
by
Anonymous08/11/14
frontlinecaster
What the hell CUCKOLDRY is doing in loving wives?
You can argue all you want about BTB being out of place(they are!) but so is cuckoldry.A cuckold is a guy who loves to be humiliated by his wife.In the end, it is all about himself(not the wife).
I understand in loving wives genre will be wives cheating(or not) engaging sexual acts.It is incredible how many stories revolve around the husband(not the wife- she is just an object in most stories).
You are talking about Xglover(dont know if i wrote right) but his story is about a guy who wants his wife pregnant by another, a hardcore fetish, for me, like a girl craping in her husband and telling him to guess what she had for breakfast(eek!).
Interesting tale about a worthless whore cunt who left her family all of a sudden. Luckily the family regrouped and came together and had a happy life. The only minor revenge was in the end when the daughter wouldn't let the mother in her house after thirty years. Fuck her.
Yep, all that matters in a story is that a woman has bad things happen to her. Plot, writing, characters, none of that is important. As long as bad things happen to women it's five stars!
And to the comment below, cuckolding isa fetish. That's why it has its own section! So you don't have to read it! The site is trying to do youa favor. Leave loving wives, stop reading the stories that bother you so much, and you lot can post your bitter misogynist shit somewhere else. Everyone wins!
There were four women in this story; a 'sick' wife, two distraught daughters, and a lonely sister-in-law. The daughters were saved and the sister-in-law went on to become the anchor for a wonderful family. That's three happy women. Yes, there was the unhappy, and sick, original wife, but she was nobody. She didn't get what she deserved; she deserved counselling or at worst padded cell in some remote mental institution where the kids could go visit her.
Again the 'happy cuckold' stuff is a fetish. Literotica has a fetish section, or should. To be a cuckold doesn't mean a husband enjoys being betrayed by an unfaithful wife; it means he is unknowingly betrayed. Wrong headed or sick men and women do it all the time, and it's a crying shame; it breaks up loving homes, debases a sacrament, and it causes horrible personal damage. The 'happy semen slurper' doesn't fit in the Loving Wives category; the 'unwitting semen slurper' does.
I liked what a prior comment writer said about Literotica; it's the combination of two words, literature and erotica. I'm going to remember that. I have a couple outlines out there, and I can forgo the inclusion of unnecessary carnality in the future. I have a few erotic stories; 'The Gold Digger', 'The Lawyer and the Killer' and 'A Fool Stumbles Into Love' being three. I have one non-erotic story about Maryland, and several that might be perceived as erotic or not dependent on the reader. Read my story 'Curse of the Scots' and tell me if you think pouring motor oil in a woman's ass is erotic. Oh yeah she was a prostitute so that wouldn't matter. I'm glad I can post all three types here.
I do not find 'happy comb slurping' or 'happy wife watching', or 'happy sharing with some bull' as anything more than 'abnormal' behavior. That's not a condemnation. I don't read werewolf, vampire, zombie, or voodoo stories either.
Give Bob some credit; he wrote a story that had a happy, maybe not a Hallmark, but certainly a happy ending. It was interesting, easy to read, and held my attention; that's a five.
Stories revolving around a husband's humiliation belong in the Fetish or BDSM section. We all agree to that. What I have never understood is why a story about divorce laws, child custody and revenge belongs in Loving Wives instead of Non-Erotic. Which part of this story involves "extra-marital fun, swinging or sharing?" That is what this category is supposed to include.
If this category's description were "extra-marital strife, divorce law minutia, bitter revenge, dismemberment and murder", then I would completely understand why these types of stories are included in this section. (I would also avoid this section, as I avoid several other sections on this site.)
Why does the BTB crowd feel as though they are entitled not only to read their revenge stories in this section, but to constantly bitch and moan about authors and stories that actually fit this category's description?
This is the first time you spoke against my comment. Here's my response:
I don't read cuck or humiliation tales. If I want to get off, I go to other categories which specialize in that area. I am in LW to read about cheaters getting taught a lesson. I like extreme revenge. I have no double standard but most revenge is against cheating wives so that's what I read. If you read my bio you'll see why I joined this site and why I stay. Also I am not a literary critic. As long as I understand what's going on I don't care about plot holes or punctuation or the like. I leave that for the English majors. In closing, if BTB tales piss you off, stop reading them. Or if you have pull with management, start a new category. Call it "Revenge against cheaters."
I'm done
Yes, it is abnormal behavior. That's why it has its own section. Incest is also abnormal, so is bdsm, they have their own sections too. Do you go there and demand vanilla sex or non erotic revenge stories? Then don't come here and do that, it shows you to be incredibly ignorant and insensitive.
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Anonymous08/11/14
FLC has escaped from the whore wing of the looney bin
She's on one of her famous, "it's not the whores fault rant.
5 *'s As I was reading thru it I was thinking about another chapter, but the way it ended, none was needed. Liked the ending of 30 years later. Guess her tattooed studs got tired of an "old lady" Good BTB story!
i will stand by what i have written and placed on this site. i have pulled two stories and am rewriting them. however, again i suggest you read some of the other material i have here. read 'the curse of the scots, and tell me it's not erotic. read 'the gold digger and tell me that's not erotic, tell me it's vanilla. then write something yourself. heck just read the first chapter of 'the lawyer and the killer'.
of course, you will not find any happy semen slurpers in any of my stories, but then i don't find that at all erotic.
is what bob has written here erotic? Well there was no 'in and out', but i thought it was quite satisfying. I gave it a five. I'd like to give it a second five if I could.
I don't give many comments, but this particular story I do like very much. Maybe it's not 'erotic' in the description of sex, but for me it was an entertaining story with sympathic characters (except for the ex-wife of course). Highest score.
Any woman who leaves a marriage just for sex is a fool, as that will not last that long. Before she realises she nothing else to the relationship, and then it is to late to go back !
Way To Go BOB!!!
Great story, a fun read, AND a happy ending.
It Just doesn't get any better!!!
SEE???
I told you that testosterone replacement therapy would help with your stories.
I'll bet you've already noticed your lack of appetite for cream pie, and sloppy seconds. You will note that your protagonists in your stories will also start to have a diminished desire for cream pie, and sloppy seconds.
A few more well written and totally enjoyable stories like this one, and I'll bet you'll be able to get your man card back in no time at all.
In fact you probably won't even have to take the test again.
I would just like to say how proud I am of you, and to keep up the good work (and therapy).
While I agree in principle that the LW category itself really doesn't have a place on Lit, since all the tales here could be divvied up amongst the other categories, I have to disagree that JPB should put his tales into any category other than what he wants to put them into. He's one of the most respected authors on this site. His tales run the LW gamut. Some are WACCs, and some are RAACs. Some are even Prevention tales. Others, like this one, are BTB. Even others, while still fitting into LW, defy description or sub-categorization.
That's just further proof that the category is meaningless. Yet that doesn't stop your fans from flaming and threatening those of us who come here for anything but violent, misogynist revenge tales. I'll stop crying foul about these types when the btb crowd stops sending death and rape threats.
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Anonymous08/14/14
carvohi
you're an idiot. Go fuck yourself.
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Anonymous08/15/14
2*s
Not a story!!
Laugh out loud at it. But I expected something without resolution . Only one posting of the last 3 or 4 has been a complete story. It is what it is no sense complaining.
Thanks for the effort, anyway.
I gave this story a five just for the comments it generated. JPB should get the credit for the passion, interest and discussion his tales create. I am a BTB non-willing cuckold guy. I don't mind a variety of LW mindsets ending up in the category. I just wish there was an easier way to avoid willing cuckold/ swinging/ sharing stories in LW than going to the last page of a story and checking tag words or reading comments and risking spoilers. This argument has been going on for years now on Lit. and is getting more common I think because of a great influx of humiliation fetish stories into LW. This problem could be alleviated if tag words were allowed at the top of stories. Literotica lords how about it??
or was the Reality TV show scripted. TK U MLJ LV NV
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Anonymous07/29/15
Okay story
But so many unanswered questions. Why didn't the girls go with their Grandfather the first time? Maybe she would have at least talked to them. Why didn't the girls go alone? Why did she leave in the first place? Inquiring minds want to know.
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Anonymous08/20/15
I gave it 5 stars ...
...It was a perfect story, well written, concise, with a believable story line and characters. My favorite element was the justified and happy ending. Kudos from the Panther fan.
I suppose we can assume the reason she left was for the excitement of the younger men. That is pretty extreme, though, considering she walked away from two daughters and the rest of her family. I could not give the story a five without some answers about her situation. Thanks for writing though.
The reader should feel some satisfaction after reading a story, this author just doesn't write that way . maybe he writes for himself and since it is free to read he doesn't really have to satisfy his readers as he would if he was published and the publishers needed him to make money for them by selling his writing. I don't know just a thought , I just usually feel left hanging when reading anything this author writes. Thanx for the effort. In this story I kept reading to find out how she could leave her kids only to have the author fail to deliver on the whole reason he used to keep the reader reading to begin with. Just sad bad writing.
Or an author with more imagination and human understanding. Bob loves to give the details and techniques of betrayal and revenge. But delving into the psyche and motives for betrayal and adultery are very rare in Bob stories. Still a nice light read, just not much there to grip your heart.
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Anonymous01/05/17
Why?
Why did Janet leave?
by
Anonymous01/29/17
why why?
Why did janet leave? How was she "seduced away from her obviously boring, humdrum life?
Why did she show up at her daughter's house? Was she expecting a warm welcome? Lots of ?s that the author, usually good, leaves us in the lurch. Disappointing ending.
English
JJJJJJJJJJJ
This was the best story ever.
Because everyone's name starts with J.
Hooray!
Can't think of much else that was particularly memorable about this read.
The nerve of Janet to slink her behind back in town. It would be nice to get Janet's side. It appears she is guilty but why the sudden disappearance with no kind of note or anything. She could have at least let the kids know why.
Strange, unbelievable & mechanistic story
Gives up her WHOLE life and family for some strange?
Ah, I doubt it.....
All Hail the King of Twisted!
The best revenge is living well, hooking up with Wifey's hotter sister, and having daughters that slam the door in Wifey's face when she tries to come back. LOL
This, ladies and gentlemen, is a JPB BTB tale. He does great ones, but always with a good twist to them. No revenge on Assholes this time around, except for Uncle Asshole who just wanted to cause trouble. No need for revenge on Wifey, either. Karma, one of my favorite bitches along with her sister Payback, took care of Wifey already.
5 HUGE Stars!
frontlinecaster
What the hell CUCKOLDRY is doing in loving wives?
You can argue all you want about BTB being out of place(they are!) but so is cuckoldry.A cuckold is a guy who loves to be humiliated by his wife.In the end, it is all about himself(not the wife).
I understand in loving wives genre will be wives cheating(or not) engaging sexual acts.It is incredible how many stories revolve around the husband(not the wife- she is just an object in most stories).
You are talking about Xglover(dont know if i wrote right) but his story is about a guy who wants his wife pregnant by another, a hardcore fetish, for me, like a girl craping in her husband and telling him to guess what she had for breakfast(eek!).
PaulB.
not so many
There are not as many holes as anon 08/10/14 thinks;
She had a car, she left it behind, no doubt because it would have made her easier to trace.
The witnesses saw "Uncle Steve" attack Frank from behind after Frank walked away from being verbally attacked.
Nice
Interesting tale about a worthless whore cunt who left her family all of a sudden. Luckily the family regrouped and came together and had a happy life. The only minor revenge was in the end when the daughter wouldn't let the mother in her house after thirty years. Fuck her.
Yep, all that matters in a story is that a woman has bad things happen to her. Plot, writing, characters, none of that is important. As long as bad things happen to women it's five stars!
And to the comment below, cuckolding isa fetish. That's why it has its own section! So you don't have to read it! The site is trying to do youa favor. Leave loving wives, stop reading the stories that bother you so much, and you lot can post your bitter misogynist shit somewhere else. Everyone wins!
FLC you are so confused...
There were four women in this story; a 'sick' wife, two distraught daughters, and a lonely sister-in-law. The daughters were saved and the sister-in-law went on to become the anchor for a wonderful family. That's three happy women. Yes, there was the unhappy, and sick, original wife, but she was nobody. She didn't get what she deserved; she deserved counselling or at worst padded cell in some remote mental institution where the kids could go visit her.
Again the 'happy cuckold' stuff is a fetish. Literotica has a fetish section, or should. To be a cuckold doesn't mean a husband enjoys being betrayed by an unfaithful wife; it means he is unknowingly betrayed. Wrong headed or sick men and women do it all the time, and it's a crying shame; it breaks up loving homes, debases a sacrament, and it causes horrible personal damage. The 'happy semen slurper' doesn't fit in the Loving Wives category; the 'unwitting semen slurper' does.
I liked what a prior comment writer said about Literotica; it's the combination of two words, literature and erotica. I'm going to remember that. I have a couple outlines out there, and I can forgo the inclusion of unnecessary carnality in the future. I have a few erotic stories; 'The Gold Digger', 'The Lawyer and the Killer' and 'A Fool Stumbles Into Love' being three. I have one non-erotic story about Maryland, and several that might be perceived as erotic or not dependent on the reader. Read my story 'Curse of the Scots' and tell me if you think pouring motor oil in a woman's ass is erotic. Oh yeah she was a prostitute so that wouldn't matter. I'm glad I can post all three types here.
I do not find 'happy comb slurping' or 'happy wife watching', or 'happy sharing with some bull' as anything more than 'abnormal' behavior. That's not a condemnation. I don't read werewolf, vampire, zombie, or voodoo stories either.
Give Bob some credit; he wrote a story that had a happy, maybe not a Hallmark, but certainly a happy ending. It was interesting, easy to read, and held my attention; that's a five.
Re. FLC, you are so confused
Stories revolving around a husband's humiliation belong in the Fetish or BDSM section. We all agree to that. What I have never understood is why a story about divorce laws, child custody and revenge belongs in Loving Wives instead of Non-Erotic. Which part of this story involves "extra-marital fun, swinging or sharing?" That is what this category is supposed to include.
If this category's description were "extra-marital strife, divorce law minutia, bitter revenge, dismemberment and murder", then I would completely understand why these types of stories are included in this section. (I would also avoid this section, as I avoid several other sections on this site.)
Why does the BTB crowd feel as though they are entitled not only to read their revenge stories in this section, but to constantly bitch and moan about authors and stories that actually fit this category's description?
@frontlinecaster
This is the first time you spoke against my comment. Here's my response:
I don't read cuck or humiliation tales. If I want to get off, I go to other categories which specialize in that area. I am in LW to read about cheaters getting taught a lesson. I like extreme revenge. I have no double standard but most revenge is against cheating wives so that's what I read. If you read my bio you'll see why I joined this site and why I stay. Also I am not a literary critic. As long as I understand what's going on I don't care about plot holes or punctuation or the like. I leave that for the English majors. In closing, if BTB tales piss you off, stop reading them. Or if you have pull with management, start a new category. Call it "Revenge against cheaters."
I'm done
NICE
Keep them coming,really nice ending BTB without the flames or revenge very classy.
carovhi
Yes, it is abnormal behavior. That's why it has its own section. Incest is also abnormal, so is bdsm, they have their own sections too. Do you go there and demand vanilla sex or non erotic revenge stories? Then don't come here and do that, it shows you to be incredibly ignorant and insensitive.
FLC has escaped from the whore wing of the looney bin
She's on one of her famous, "it's not the whores fault rant.
CINCO ESTRELLAS
from BTB BRIGADES & HARRY IV WITNESS
`Good story
5 *'s As I was reading thru it I was thinking about another chapter, but the way it ended, none was needed. Liked the ending of 30 years later. Guess her tattooed studs got tired of an "old lady" Good BTB story!
dear front line caster...
i will stand by what i have written and placed on this site. i have pulled two stories and am rewriting them. however, again i suggest you read some of the other material i have here. read 'the curse of the scots, and tell me it's not erotic. read 'the gold digger and tell me that's not erotic, tell me it's vanilla. then write something yourself. heck just read the first chapter of 'the lawyer and the killer'.
of course, you will not find any happy semen slurpers in any of my stories, but then i don't find that at all erotic.
is what bob has written here erotic? Well there was no 'in and out', but i thought it was quite satisfying. I gave it a five. I'd like to give it a second five if I could.
Loved it
I don't give many comments, but this particular story I do like very much. Maybe it's not 'erotic' in the description of sex, but for me it was an entertaining story with sympathic characters (except for the ex-wife of course). Highest score.
Ten Stars
Five for JPB's story, and another 5 for Carvohi's comment below.
Tattoos !
Why do women like men with tattoos !
Any woman who leaves a marriage just for sex is a fool, as that will not last that long. Before she realises she nothing else to the relationship, and then it is to late to go back !
Right ON!
Way To Go BOB!!!
Great story, a fun read, AND a happy ending.
It Just doesn't get any better!!!
SEE???
I told you that testosterone replacement therapy would help with your stories.
I'll bet you've already noticed your lack of appetite for cream pie, and sloppy seconds. You will note that your protagonists in your stories will also start to have a diminished desire for cream pie, and sloppy seconds.
A few more well written and totally enjoyable stories like this one, and I'll bet you'll be able to get your man card back in no time at all.
In fact you probably won't even have to take the test again.
I would just like to say how proud I am of you, and to keep up the good work (and therapy).
@frontlinecaster
While I agree in principle that the LW category itself really doesn't have a place on Lit, since all the tales here could be divvied up amongst the other categories, I have to disagree that JPB should put his tales into any category other than what he wants to put them into. He's one of the most respected authors on this site. His tales run the LW gamut. Some are WACCs, and some are RAACs. Some are even Prevention tales. Others, like this one, are BTB. Even others, while still fitting into LW, defy description or sub-categorization.
IronDragon
That's just further proof that the category is meaningless. Yet that doesn't stop your fans from flaming and threatening those of us who come here for anything but violent, misogynist revenge tales. I'll stop crying foul about these types when the btb crowd stops sending death and rape threats.
carvohi
you're an idiot. Go fuck yourself.
2*s
Not a story!!
Laugh out loud at it. But I expected something without resolution . Only one posting of the last 3 or 4 has been a complete story. It is what it is no sense complaining.
Thanks for the effort, anyway.
AMerryMan
good story
liked it alot
Five Stars!
I loved the happy ending!
nice but sad
every one wants to know why.
I agree with tootight 1
Why
Five stars
I gave this story a five just for the comments it generated. JPB should get the credit for the passion, interest and discussion his tales create. I am a BTB non-willing cuckold guy. I don't mind a variety of LW mindsets ending up in the category. I just wish there was an easier way to avoid willing cuckold/ swinging/ sharing stories in LW than going to the last page of a story and checking tag words or reading comments and risking spoilers. This argument has been going on for years now on Lit. and is getting more common I think because of a great influx of humiliation fetish stories into LW. This problem could be alleviated if tag words were allowed at the top of stories. Literotica lords how about it??
DID IT REALLY HAPPEN THAT WAY
or was the Reality TV show scripted. TK U MLJ LV NV
Okay story
But so many unanswered questions. Why didn't the girls go with their Grandfather the first time? Maybe she would have at least talked to them. Why didn't the girls go alone? Why did she leave in the first place? Inquiring minds want to know.
I gave it 5 stars ...
...It was a perfect story, well written, concise, with a believable story line and characters. My favorite element was the justified and happy ending. Kudos from the Panther fan.
I Suppose
I suppose we can assume the reason she left was for the excitement of the younger men. That is pretty extreme, though, considering she walked away from two daughters and the rest of her family. I could not give the story a five without some answers about her situation. Thanks for writing though.
Gave it a one.....
The reader should feel some satisfaction after reading a story, this author just doesn't write that way . maybe he writes for himself and since it is free to read he doesn't really have to satisfy his readers as he would if he was published and the publishers needed him to make money for them by selling his writing. I don't know just a thought , I just usually feel left hanging when reading anything this author writes. Thanx for the effort. In this story I kept reading to find out how she could leave her kids only to have the author fail to deliver on the whole reason he used to keep the reader reading to begin with. Just sad bad writing.
Too much mystery.
Really needed more here.
It's just Bob. Why is for wimps, I guess.
Or an author with more imagination and human understanding. Bob loves to give the details and techniques of betrayal and revenge. But delving into the psyche and motives for betrayal and adultery are very rare in Bob stories. Still a nice light read, just not much there to grip your heart.
Why?
Why did Janet leave?
why why?
Why did janet leave? How was she "seduced away from her obviously boring, humdrum life?
Why did she show up at her daughter's house? Was she expecting a warm welcome? Lots of ?s that the author, usually good, leaves us in the lurch. Disappointing ending.
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