The End Of The Crush

I really wanted

The last line to read
Or the end?

Oh well, I think they forgot the condom
In all their excitement
Maybe an offspring
Will be born

this is the End or Objective towards which

Crush moves .......the Grande Finale , so to speak , Magnetron ?
I gave 5 for Hush.....Rush......Blush .......Crush .....

Nicely done, Magnetron

I might have, however, avoided the allusion to the "Immaculate Conception." Everything else in the poem suggested a palpable exciting sexual energy, but for me the IC suggested instead something comical, absurd.

The last two stanzas were great, almost made me forget the Blessed Virgin.

The setting is a convent, yes?

There is no fear of offspring.

FEELS LIKE THE 1ST TIME

but hoping for more. TK U MLJ LV NV

Hypoxia is onto something here .....

Thanks everyone for reading.

if i didnt know better

I would swear you were a lesbian trapped in a man's body with a poetic affilliation for lesbian scenes :-p
Interesting write, I read it for the third time today,

There are a couple of structure things I would Vince butbi feel that is more an attempt to shift it into the way I would have written it. The undertones and subtlety are very good, enjoyed this magnetron.

stupid

Cracked phone screen and typos

@ Todski

It's those sausage fingers of yours at work again.

And I already have put in my application to be a lesbian in my next life.

yes...

Does feel like it....more...