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The same...
Some mistake...this is the same as part 1...And as bad...
Beautiful
I disagree with the previous troll - I thought your story was well-written and had a really nice twist at the end - keep on writing - you're very good at it!
Never continue
Two chapters of absolute drivel are quite enough. And get someone other than a 10 year old to write your dialogue.
re: anonymous-beautiful
Who's the troll? Think again.
re: Beautiful
Troll: nound, asshole who can't stand when others dare to have a different opinion, who can't just comment on the story with its opinion without trashing others.
re: re: Beautiful
That was, of course, supposed to be noun, not nound.
enuff crap
no need to continue a 1/10 of a star shit tale
It worries me
that calclover can write two anny comments. Did he run next door to his boyfriend's house?
Fun story.
I don't know what the argument is about!
If you don't like these types of stories then you should not read them and You should definitely NOT vote! The voting isn't if you agree with CUCK or not ... It's if you think the author had a well told story! I believe this was .... Also I don't look at the technical side of the story (grammar, punctuation and such) as this is somewhat of a novice site. Professionals have a paid publishing house to fix stories!
I appreciate the time, effort and talents of these authors and get to read stories that I would not being going to the bookstore to purchase. It allows me to enjoy an art that I would not normally participate in.
BTW .... Can someone tell me what a TROLL is ? I see it used often and belive I know what it means, but would like to be sure.
Be sure of your "Mark"
Now that your a full time stud, with a very good rep to go along with it, you need to set some standards. Like only fuckable women. What is a fuckable woman? One that turns you on. Also insist on the want to be cuckold show you a picture of the woman. That way you know who you are going to fuck and if they are fuckable. Also, how many of these hot wives have you knocked up? And I am not sure why that rich dude got all upset. So his daughter has now been broke in by a stud who pumped her full of hot thick man cream. His little snowflake is a hot slut who will be needing a lot more stud cock from now on. She will crave it. I look forward to this studs further adventures in fucking married women. And ignore the trolls. LOL
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