All Comments on 'Cheaters Never Prosper'

by CassidyCaine

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
loved it

That was great and can't wait for the next part

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Are these commenters serious

You realize this is fiction, right? Die in a fire

Also, as far as the story goes, I found it moderately entertaining, although I had reading from the perspective of the dom

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

How come Jamie had never seen an adult cock before he was 18. All he had to do was look between his legs. Some editing issues. So so story

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

the teacher needs to be fired for what he did

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Fingernails scratching a blackboard...

would be more entertaining than this piece of trash.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
The story itself is neither good or bad.

Rather amusing sanctimonious shit from the readers. I gather that's the typical mentality of American hypocrites. Read the bible, eat shit or whatever if you don't like amateur erotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Not much, really.

I did not care much one way or another for this story but I can see why it would offend some. As for these Euro-twits who don't agree with comments they turn out to be as obnoxious as the people they attack.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Ignore these other assholes

I thought it wasn't half bad

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Very Sexy.

I had a teacher like this in High School. Everyone knew he was gay, but he was still popular with the girls. I guess they thought he was safe. He was, But for boys ....he was fantastic. He was not rough, he was kind and gentle to all his bois. We loved him.

RebeccaCherieRebeccaCherieover 9 years ago
Naughty but exciting

Yes, very naughty indeed !!! But exciting, especially when Jamie was tied up. Come on Gurls, am I the only one out there that finds the thought of being tied up by a strong man while we are dressed en femme just incredibly exciting ?

Damsel in Distress ;-)

Rebecca

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Question

How the fuck old is this kid supposed to be?

If the author meant the kids underage then the defenders can go eat shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
What if he is underage?

So you think incest, nonconsensual sex... are more palatable and acceptable here while underage sex, which is more common in our everyday life than you think, repelling? And why 18? The age of consent in many countries across Europe and Asia is 16. Open your eyes, and see beyond your tiny well.

No wonder someone posted that American hypocrite shit here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Coulda been a contender--dipshit defenders aside!

Thanks for reminding us why Europe is so fucked up. This story didn't have to be sick but it was. A few words would have fixed it. Tue author it is not a half bad writer but some of the people defending it have their heads so far up their ass they're coming out their navel. Of course they probably love that, too!

21anna21annaover 9 years ago
Chill out people ...

Like all stories on Literotica, this is a FANTASY. Give the author a break. If you folks find THIS rather mild tale so offensive, then what the hell are you doing on this site in the first place? I thought it was pretty hot, actually and hope there's a sequel ,,,

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Clearly not everyone read it.

The story description CLEARLY states the student is 18 years old which is within site guidelines. And the story list him as a senior in high school. Most seniors in high school in the US is 18. Gotta love people who want to throw outaccusations without bothering to read fully.

hindsight2020hindsight2020over 9 years ago
Can't really enjoy rape.

Well written, but choosing the rapist pov made it a bit difficult to connect. From the victim's pov, it would have had a stronger connection to self discovery. Still 4s

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A followup would be nice..

Where he fems him up with other girly clothes and in the end he decides, fuck college I like this better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Most entertaining

I'm referring to the readers' comments.

Have to agree with 21anna, if people can't stomach this rather mild tale, then they shouldn't come here. And the most laughable of them all is the one called Coulda been...what an Ass, typical obnoxious and uneducated moron.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Pt 2 needed

fun to see Jamie educated by his teacher in being a girl, more dressing more teaching and more fun. what about it cassidy?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
What's the problem

We have entire sections dedicated to rape, why is this so bad? It's a FANTASY, people

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53over 9 years ago
Good beginning

You're off to a good start. You could probably get another 2 maybe 3 chapters about the boy/girl evolving into a sissy girl/boi.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
What's the real problem?

There are jerks here who try to stuff their own kind of moral down other's throats. It's even worse than rape. So, if you find this tame little tale unsavory, go jerk off elsewhere.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
why stop here

Lets see another chapter as Jamie gets more into his-her role at the teacher's behest and see him get more into Jamie as he makes her more girly--clothes make over and more dirty fun.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Proof read

you need to do some proof reading as there are quite a few mistakes in gramar and otherwise, such as how can he/she grab the edge of the desk if her hands are tied behind her back

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Her/his back and forth was confusing...

But very good story, looking forward to possible sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
more

please write another part to this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
let Share Jamie

Love to see the little bitch passed around to other teachers who pay him for the pleasure. Of course he keeps all the money for himself but makes sure little Jamie is very, very compliant no matter how kinky the demands.

RodnBottomRodnBottomalmost 9 years ago
VERY HOT!!!

Your descriptive writing made me hard and wishing I was the student. Do you have another installment.

Is sucking cock, swallowing cum and taking a love pole anally really as great as your describe?

I can only hope that some man will find me attractive enough to make me and train me to be his bottom.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
NEXT CHAPTER

ARE YOU GOING TO CONTINUE THE STORY ?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COMMING

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I want it

I liked it and is there a big hairy daddy out there that wants to take control of me and make me do stuff for and too him. Send me your pics and tell me what you want me to do for you . I am at laureesa at live dot com .PLEASE !!!

bluesky496bluesky496about 8 years ago

i loved the story and the final acceptance was so perfect but i really do want to read more so please please write another chapter .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
good one

one day I was at work for awhile when the new boss came in he was a older man and he told us that thing will change a round here I told him right then he ask why I said that I just told him were heard that before he said we will see then he told me I will see you later at five he call me into the office I walk in and ask what you want he got up and lock the door sit your ass down lets get one thing here I am your boss and as long you work here I owe your ass as a joke I got up and pull my pants down and show my ass but I for got I had panties on he look at me and my pantie ass well what have I here I told him it was a bet that I would not wear panties to work but I never thought I get caught in them just then he walk over and put his hand on my panties and felt my ass I did not move I just move my legs a bit so he could feel more he saw this he said I think you and I will become close friend just then I felt his hand pull my panties down he told me well girly boy what should I do now I know he said let you go and work for some one else I told him please sir I do anything you want he said fine I want your ass but knot to-day I ask him when in the morning but first you need to learn who the boss he push me on a chair and pull out his cock now bitch boy suck my cock after awhile he came in my mouth yes that was good now be here at six in the morning just wear a shirt and pants I said yes sir I was there at six he was waiting in his car he open the car door I got in once in he said pull your pants off and pit this on it was black thong panties after I got the panties on they felt really soft then he turn down a dirt road he stop the car and said get out you walk down the path here and I will meet you at the house there I can not walk like this yes you can I got out and walk down the path when I got to the house a older lady was there and he was standing beside her well dear you think he do yes he will do I see you got him in panties have you take his ass yet no but you will make him beg for a man cock yes I turn him into a girly boy well after I got in the house the lady told me the only thing you will wear is panties and bra you will work as my house maid well after the first week I had a dress put on me and at night I got to sleep in a nightie one night I walk in to his room his wife was in a short teddy she ask what I want I told my breasts hurts a bit when she turn around I saw a big strap-on cock I look at her cock do my girly boy like this I said yes miss come here and show me I walk over sat on a chair and pull her to me I open my mouth and suck her cock yes girl suck mommy cock I did then mommy pull out she walk me over to the bed and I lay down and she lift my nightie and ripe my panties off and shove her cock in my ass hole as she pound my ass I said yes mommy that feel nice my baby girl is becoming a big girl and soon daddy will have your pussy ass will you like to be are girly bitch and please mommy and daddy I said yes well now after five years I become a house wife

Ewriter111Ewriter111over 7 years ago
Just punishment

She won't soon forget what happens to boi pussy. When she walks home with that soreness in her hole and the gooey cum dripping into her panties, she'll realize her manhood has vanished.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
My man pussy creams

Thank you for this delicious account of her transformation and acceptance. Lovely. Me next please.

ScargoScargoabout 7 years ago
Yummy student

I too wish I was your student, my anus too!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Great story when are you doing the next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Love the Teach!

Enjoyed your story a lot! Lost my virginity to my teacher at 13.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
How sorry he was?

Not at all. One of two things happened. She turned him around and he kicked her. She stumbled and he beat the shit out of her WITH his hands tied together. The end. OR. He went home. His Father took one look at him, called the police and had the teacher arrested. She lost her credentials and spent 3 years in jail. The end to a really badly thought out story.

4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiam9 months ago

My mother asked me what a man could do for a man that a woman could not. I didn't tell her how a man can make me feel so safe and warm and needed as he makes me his girl.

MichaelfantasiesMichaelfantasies7 months ago

As I read this story, I found myself in the Character of James/Jamie. There's something quite real how you write. It's like you know how a person feels.

You wrote, "I don't understand," he said, his voice almost a whisper. He looked up at me with wide eyes and a terrified expression but I know it was fear of accepting what was in his heart. I'd seen enough to know he wanted to wear the clothes in his writing and doodling but was afraid of what it meant. He wouldn't have to fear now, just trust in me and let me lead him to the right place.

'Wrap you hand around the base," I said, pulling my own hand away. "And open you lips." Her gloved hand came up to wrap around the shaft as his lips parted as if his body was already under my command, despite the fear still in his eyes. I could feel him shaking through the hand gently caressing the base. Before he could consider it, I pulled his head towards me so the tip passed through his lovely, pink lips and the head slid over his tongue. Or I should say her tongue as she was quickly becoming my slutty cock sucker."

Then bending Jamie over the desk, he took Jamie's virginity. Like my first time, I cried as it hurt, buy my boyfriend wouldn't pull out and fucked me anyway. It's as if he knew I needed to be fucked. How did he know that about me? How does a man know that about guys like me? Anyone reading my comments that know?

What you wrote is so scary to hear, yet so hot! "I leaned over him as I settled deep inside, my body draped over his back enjoying the sensual curve and softness of him. Sliding my hand into his hair, I pulled back on the blonde locks so he had to pull his face up which brought his ear to my lips. "Your all mine now, slut," I whispered with a throaty voice. "You will be my bitch and enjoy it. I know you wanted to be my pretty girl so don't you worry, I'll take care of you."

As much as I'd be afraid of something like this happening to me, in one way, I'd so much WANT this to happen! I want someone to help me get out of my shell.

This story is definitely one of my favorites! Five stars. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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