Was there more to this story that I missed? Why did he leave her, what were her 'terms'? What we have is a nice, short erotic coupling, with no back story at all. So the writing was good, the story read as a fragment.
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Was there more to this story that I missed? Why did he leave her, what were her 'terms'?
What we have is a nice, short erotic coupling, with no back story at all. So the writing was good, the story read as a fragment.
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