All Comments on 'Feeding the Pack Ch. 03'

by VelvetCream

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Really enjoying this and am excited to see where it goes! Longer chapters,would be better, but I don't mind too much as you seem to be posting quickly - which is great!!

angelicbeautyangelicbeautyover 9 years ago

Please make the chapters longer. It's great

Dutchgirl82Dutchgirl82over 9 years ago

An unusual kind of story, combining werewolves with lactating, but that's never been a negative to me before! At least on it's own it wasn't. And since I like your writing (no language mistakes jumped out yet, and the dosages of description, emotion and dialogue and the pace of action are good)

Curious to see where it goes and if I continue to like your plot!

ariesgirlariesgirlover 9 years ago

She is going to end up falling in love with the crazy alpha.

I wonder if they ever thought of asking females if they wanted to donate their bodies first before kidnapping them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Liking this a lot.

Would like to see longer chapters though, but if you're going to post every day, well I'm happy with that. :)

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 9 years ago
Reply for God(dess) of war

Said they'd not found anyone for 30 years. And they is a sickness. Not really that kind of time, eh?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Hot!! But sodden panties don't float to the ground. Just saying.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
What?

This makes no sense!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
it makes no sense at all

Chopped ..and confusing..wolf got milk...

baikalisanbaikalisanover 9 years ago
Interested

To see where this will go and get some back story on why they need her milk to cure this sickness. Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awesome

Loving this story!

whatilikeaboutuwhatilikeaboutuover 9 years ago
you got me

one page at a time is a tease. But I will be a patient reader...sigh..lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Keep Going!

Great story! Please do more than a page at a time!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
MORE PLEASE

I'm absolutely obsessed with this story! Please please please add chapters! Also I think you should do more than one page.

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
Love this

Read all three chapters want to read more of your work. I want to know what happens next.......

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More...update

Love this story please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
"wolf got milk"

Some cute writer--

"Wolf got milk."

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great story

Wonder if she is his mate though. Hope u clear that question up soon

jljboucherjljboucherover 9 years ago
Very good!!

Please update soon!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
pleeeeease update

I love this story. Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Please Continue

Please continue. I would gladly help edit if you need it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
please please please!!!

can you please continue this story??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
more please

Please continue this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
hot!!

Please continue!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Please continue this story.

I have a seriously difficult time finding literotica that I like, this one is going so good, please consider adding chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

This is such a intriguing concept and story I would greatly appreciate you adding longer chapters hopefully soon. The story just excites me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
MORE !

There are a large number of us on pins and needles waiting to see the next

chapter !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Continue!

We are all awaiting the next chapter. You have something great here....keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I do hope you continue this, but no pressure. I'm just really enjoying the plot line and character development. This story is great and already has me hooked after three chapters. Please continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Creative!

Enjoying your twist on werewolves and ability to express your imagination. Good on ya!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

More please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent

Please continue!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Come back!!

Please finish!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Don't make me beg

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
This author hasn't written anything more since 2014

Do not expect any more from the writer. It's been forgotten as so many others.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

This was just strait up weird.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
WHAT???????

How can you write a story with no ending?????

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
When will the next part come out?

Please more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Love it!

Please write more! I love this story so much!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love it!!

Please, finish this story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Please write more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
More?

Are you going to do more? I would LOVE more added. PLEEEEEASE?!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I wish the story would continue. I keep coming back to this writer hoping to see new additions.

JazzHandsJazzHandsabout 2 years ago

I hope you write some more soon

Sassybutterfly99Sassybutterfly99over 1 year ago

Wish you would write more of this!!!

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