Really enjoying this and am excited to see where it goes! Longer chapters,would be better, but I don't mind too much as you seem to be posting quickly - which is great!!
An unusual kind of story, combining werewolves with lactating, but that's never been a negative to me before! At least on it's own it wasn't. And since I like your writing (no language mistakes jumped out yet, and the dosages of description, emotion and dialogue and the pace of action are good)
Curious to see where it goes and if I continue to like your plot!
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Really enjoying this and am excited to see where it goes! Longer chapters,would be better, but I don't mind too much as you seem to be posting quickly - which is great!!
Please make the chapters longer. It's great
An unusual kind of story, combining werewolves with lactating, but that's never been a negative to me before! At least on it's own it wasn't. And since I like your writing (no language mistakes jumped out yet, and the dosages of description, emotion and dialogue and the pace of action are good)
Curious to see where it goes and if I continue to like your plot!
She is going to end up falling in love with the crazy alpha.
I wonder if they ever thought of asking females if they wanted to donate their bodies first before kidnapping them.
Liking this a lot.
Would like to see longer chapters though, but if you're going to post every day, well I'm happy with that. :)
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Said they'd not found anyone for 30 years. And they is a sickness. Not really that kind of time, eh?
Hot!! But sodden panties don't float to the ground. Just saying.
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What?
This makes no sense!
it makes no sense at all
Chopped ..and confusing..wolf got milk...
Interested
To see where this will go and get some back story on why they need her milk to cure this sickness. Please continue
Awesome
Loving this story!
you got me
one page at a time is a tease. But I will be a patient reader...sigh..lol
Keep Going!
Great story! Please do more than a page at a time!!
I can't wait for more
MORE PLEASE
I'm absolutely obsessed with this story! Please please please add chapters! Also I think you should do more than one page.
Love this
Read all three chapters want to read more of your work. I want to know what happens next.......
More...update
Love this story please continue
"wolf got milk"
Some cute writer--
"Wolf got milk."
great story
Wonder if she is his mate though. Hope u clear that question up soon
Very good!!
Please update soon!!
pleeeeease update
I love this story. Please continue
Please Continue
Please continue. I would gladly help edit if you need it.
please please please!!!
can you please continue this story??
more please
Please continue this story
hot!!
Please continue!!
Please continue this story.
I have a seriously difficult time finding literotica that I like, this one is going so good, please consider adding chapters.
This is such a intriguing concept and story I would greatly appreciate you adding longer chapters hopefully soon. The story just excites me.
MORE !
There are a large number of us on pins and needles waiting to see the next
chapter !
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