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The Magic Water

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/13/14

Well that was silly

And probably belonged in Sci/Fi. UGH!

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by Anonymous08/13/14

Keep it up!

Welcome to the site. Fun first effort, good pacing, and you edited well. Keep posting, you're on the right track to greatness.

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by darkrage608/13/14

How does it belong in Sci/Fi?

Anyways really hot story, looking forward to seeing more from you.

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by Anonymous08/14/14

warning

prolonged and constant use of magic water will result in permanent shemaleness. user discretion is not advised. please recycle :P

love to read more on this

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by Anonymous08/24/14

sequel please

Please write a sequel to this story.

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by Anonymous10/26/14

More intimance

Make it so they actually fuck each other

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by DBRN8412/18/14

Great

Very hot for your first try. :)

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by Anonymous01/23/15

COOOOOOL.

You should make a sequel. And a hotter one, making them hermaphrodites, like when drinking that water they grew dicks forever and they don't lose their pussies and uterus. So then they can have both reproductive organs and both can get the other pregnant.

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by Anonymous04/29/15

COME BACK TO US

johnnysoda please deliver us from evil

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