All Comments on 'Wicked Stepmother'

For the read.

good revenge

too fast

story line had many possibilities but you rushed through it. maybe do a rewrite?

While I would have preferred something longer (and expected graphic hate filled sex in detail), I liked the story. Too often authors (myself included) don't spend much time considering the story, using a porno styled set up and ending with the inevitable climax. It was nice to read an actual (and thoughtful) story.

just too short

It was a little quick, but I liked it...

Magnificent story line. Unique, and laced with irony. Yet, believable. The only complaint, it could have been longer.

Fleshing out the new widow/wife was a brand new thread worth building on. You already had a developed character and history to build upon.

I give it 5 stars for unique.

5stars. Thanks for sharing

A nice revenge story, I love it. AAAAAA++++++