Not My Fault Ch. 03

Well it's SOMEBODIES fault.

Just plain bad.

Started out not bring your fault but now you went from man to full out puss. If you still have your balls then man up

The previous two comments

Are from ignorant idiots, disregard what they've said as it is pointless rubbish. Please continue on with the story it is very hot and I love the way it is progressing

awful

Oh god are you for real!!!!!!

Fun!

It's actually both fun and hot, which is pretty hard to do. Coming in front of your sister is pretty steamy, but doing it so she won't discover that you have already come is pretty ironic. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Also, regardless of what anonymous naysayers say, there must be plenty of readers who like what you've written, just look at your score!

Very well done,

I loved it so far, and I hope that you plan to continue the story. I DO feel sorry for Paul though, his sister is going to KILL him now that she know about the date!