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by Trixareforkids08/13/14

Great pacing

And now I've got to read Cell, lol.
I really hope it's not too creepy
I hate the creepy tales
But you hooked me good with this piece.

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by tazz31708/13/14

THE BEAT GOES ON

continuing to doomsday. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Magnetron08/13/14

@ Trix

You could always wait for the movie that should be out soon. YouTube has a trailer.

I wrote this as challenge. I took some liberties as it is not entirely true to the story.

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by twelveoone08/14/14

ordinarly

I wouldn't recommend this, goes against the grain, ya know
The technological plague passing

In a singular vibrational screaming
just keepin up with the nings, nings, ya know.
5ed

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