Upon a Savage Shore Ch. 13

Whew...

Received my Savage Shore fix for the week. Thanks for the release!

The week?

HAH!

I'm like a fucking junkie here.

AI KNEED MOAR.

Perfect story builder

I love it you've added great character builders throughout this story and now their new rather large pet. Awesome

sooo ya....

im gonna need you to come on saturday... got some... next chapters that need to be finished

just because I will whine about the delay, doesnt mean I dont appreciate your work...

buuuuut come on man, this is worse then a drug, getting lost in the story, no more having a life for you!


I request that when done, you go over the whole thing again and if possible, submit it to Smashwords or the like, I got a few story's from LR there now, stories as entrancing as this are worth it, keep up the damn fine job

love it

My craving has been settled for a few days.

Awesome dialog

Delightful.

Nice work!

I have enjoyed the series a lot so far, and this chapter proves no different. Outstanding work.

Great Reading...

Another great chapter to add to an already impressive story. I look forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing.

5 stars

Read the series and loved it. Please keep up the great work.

Great story...

thanks for sharing!

One problem.

Toooooooo short!!!!!! Need more mental stimulation!!! Keep up the fantastic work! This is how I wished the Man-Kzin wars had gone. Waiting impatiently for the next chapter!

Great

Excellent chapter as usual, looking forward to the rest of the story.

Still hooked, keep it up

Mixing it up...

Mr. Fish,

So many authors on here use Sci-fi as an excuse to just roll out Hairy, sweaty, scaly, sticky, tentacle sex. Nothing wrong with that. It is good to see someone mixing it up and writing a story that is...well...a story! If I had my way I would wish to have some parts elaborated on a little more but that's just me, on the whole I have been able to happily rate each of your chapters a 5. I wanted to let you know that I thank you for your work to write this story, and hopefully others in the future! :-)

Sincerely, Payenbrant

Outstanding Story as usual

Keep up the good works. I also have problems with viewing this story on my IPhone, It may be the interface between LR, the writing platform you are using and IOS. Or it is just a glitch in the system.

Keep up the good work and I will wait (impatiently) for the next chapter. I also know that you sell no wine before it's time and release no chapter before it's done.

App Reading Error

I think the problem with IPad & Android reading actually IS that you are using characters that apps don't understand when rendering from Literotica. Myself I found that I can't view anything after the "+>0

iPhone issue

Maybe suggest using a different app for internet browsing. I use chrome on my iPhone and have no such issues.

Ugh...dude, that was just nasty. Did ya really had to have the dog-thing eat those parasites? Moreover, don't you think its at least a bit disgusting to have them scratch it, and come away with their hands covered in bugs? I think I puked a little in my mouth reading this one, so you won't get a 5 this time. Sorry.

APP Reading Error Part 2

I actually use the android app when reading on my phone. My previous comment actually had more content but those characters seem to just make anything after them disappear. FYI, I posted the comment on my PC via chrome so.... lol. Regardless, keep up the outstanding work.

more

I like this story keep it going can't wait for the next chapter.

Good story always looking forward to the next chapter most stories ive read have at least a few errors its refreshing to see yours does not

Outstanding!

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Trippy,

But fun!
A lot of clever little asides and character / subplot building, very good tale sir!
Jason

First time something threw me in your story

I am loving this. It is very well written. This is the first discontinuity that tripped me up in your writing. Since you requested such feedback, I want to help. It was the cure for Rovers itching. I'm am pretty sure that ashes are not acidic. They should have a high pH which means they are basic.- low pH is acidic. At least that is what I remember from chemistry class. And you can make soap by combining oil and a base (lye) with heat and stirring. You make lye by putting water through ashes. I made soap once this way. Anyway, to make my convoluted reasoning shorter. I am pretty sure that Rover's ashes are basic not acidic.

Kayakbabe is correct

ashes do have a high pH (around 9-10) meaning they are basic, not acidic.

intermission

I like the brief change of pace. Rover would likely make a good addition to any household :)

agreed

The intermission helps fill out the story and give it a better feel.

DJ