If Only They Knew

I really don't know how to comment on this

it looks like a successful emulation of what would be their writing. wryly notes the horses and lack of unicorn.
so 5ed

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then where would be the fun and experimentation, TK U MLJ LJ NV

Magnet : one's an Alpha Dominant personality 'n the other seems to

Be a Beta Follower person so their Match could be made in Lezzie Heaven but seems a lack of communication or confidence crisis occured ..........sad .........

This was old and it ended after each girl had her say.

And I hated that it just ended abruptly like that, so I concocted the scenario in my mind of them being on a stage each with a microphone. They each have their say and then join one another in singing the last part in duet / unison.

And I had my doubts that it would work at all this way.

why am i seeing

A montage mash up between glee and black swan? Very cool interplay of sharing the chorus, juxtaposing the contrast of black and white all old troups with a fresh lesbian zest lol.


On punctuation which since the discussion thread I am now looking at, I think you helped you flow and delivery with it here, followed it nicely.