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Sisters, Friends, and Lovers Ch. 34

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by Anonymous08/14/14

Sequel needed

You still need to have Steve, Doug and Ace to fuck their mom (Ace's grandma) and his dad to fuck his granddaughter Lori and daughters in law Sheri and Fran, as well as Sheila to pull some of the others into making a few pornos.

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by Anonymous08/14/14

This has an odd taste of biography, though some bits seem just too good. There's also a couple of slips on names early on but really solid character continuity . So Steve, is this semi or mostly autobiographical? :p

Also... The end? Nooo! It was going so well, we want more. What am I supposed to do if not obsessively checking for new chapters your profile each day?

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by arrowglass08/14/14

Totally awesome!

One of my all time favorite stories...hope it does not end here! Will be looking for your new story. Wouldn't it be great if we all got along like that?

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by BenedictRaymond12/03/14

Awesome

Thank You for a great story absolutely loved it I hope there will be more from this story in the future

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by reader_363407/31/15

Thanks for completing the story

The end of the story did seem a little rushed with many aspects glossed over. There are certainly a few aspects that would have merited a chapter of their own. However, I have to give credit to the author for finishing the story and, sort of, drawing it to a conclusion instead of just leaving it in mid air as many other authors do when they get tired of the story they are writing.
Overall, this has been a significant piece of writing and a great story that is definitely worth rereading. One of the better Literotica stories I have read.

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by dozen04/28/16

I am so sorry that this story is finished.

I have enjoyed every chapter.

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by samrowley196608/03/16

I want to be....

Fran :-) hell I would be happy being any one of the main female characters !
Another wickedly arousing story by Mr.Wallace :-)

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by HAWKJ7210/22/16

Twisted

Love the twisted ending more then what I thought might happen. Here I thought it would be the little sister, but love that you made it Zoey. I picked up the series two days ago, and one of my all time favorites on this sight. Honestly, Zoey quickly became one of my favorites in the series.

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