Convincing Me Pt. 08

Beautifully Written

I loved this story. Please write more....

longer!

I love love love this story line, but it's too short. It would be awesome if you would maybe combine 2 of your chapters into 1?

maria is her mom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg i knew there was some kind of twist cumming.nah just kidding though it would be kind of fucked up

This is an AMAZING series

I love the two characters and how they interact.

I just wish these chapters were longer so I could have more to enjoy.

....Please submit the next chapter soon!

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Yeah, I the only thing I "dislike" is that the chapters are short, but that's mainly selfish. The story is becoming so incredibly tender and powerful. This is really great.

nice

Liked the story very much, but it didn't start getting interesting til about half of chapter 2 and so on. Great story though :) I liked it

Great series

I hope you continue with these two as not only is it sexy, your series has the wonderful message of getting to know someone before judging. In today's society that is a very rare message; I am a dude who hates judgmental people. Side note: I'd love to hear more jokes from the dad because he had some great one liners and is an overall likable guy.

Come on! It's been almost a month! Where's chapter 9 already?!