Well written, superbly paced and characters that could easily become multiple chapters of a little growth with the situation or it could really bloom as it's been set. BRAVO!!
Thanks for sharing.
Well written and good character development. Nice style - story flows well and readers' interest is kept. Any plans for more chapters?
I hope this is just the start of a longer story with another chapter or two. George in Omaha
it would be nice if there were more chapters to this story.
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Excellent Story Line
Well written, superbly paced and characters that could easily become multiple chapters of a little growth with the situation or it could really bloom as it's been set.
BRAVO!!
Good Read***
Thanks for sharing.
Well Written ! Any Plans for more?
Well written and good character development. Nice style - story flows well and readers' interest is kept.
Any plans for more chapters?
Good story
I hope this is just the start of a longer story with another chapter or two.
George in Omaha
more please
it would be nice if there were more chapters to this story.
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