you built it up so well but when it came to the sex, it just happened so fast. try to make the sex part longer and worth the read of the build up.
good job. I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.
That was pretty good
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kind of like a slingshot
you built it up so well but when it came to the sex, it just happened so fast. try to make the sex part longer and worth the read of the build up.
good job.
good job. I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.
That was pretty good
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