Balls

your a good writeri

Even if it is always sharp and acidic. i feel sorry for your man if you taste kike you write. i avoid your work even though other work under other names still sound like you. i try to go around it.not my cup of tea,

This lady man is working it!

Now to nit pick, because I can ~blows raspberry~

There are a few places that feel forced:
'One hundred percent natural' would work better as 'All natural, I'll have you know'. Or something with an ending to fit into the rhyme scheme.
'Labels are so unnecessary' -labels hold no sway- would fit better with the thought of holding/cupping those lovely lady balls though it would break the ee sound.

Fun ride throughout.
Here's your stars *****

testing ..... testing ..... testing

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@ Trix

This one was done hurriedly and I definitely dropped the balls in a few places.

@ nikkitta101

I have no idea what you are saying in your comment.

Great Poem

An awesome tranny poem!

It's bouncy! bouncy! bouncy! bouncy!...

...fun! fun! fun! fun! fuuunnn!!
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i said

Your a good writer but i avoid your work. not my flavor.

@ nikkitta101

okay ..........

Do you have anything specific to say about this piece in particular?

And you are more than welcome to introduce yourself in the poetry forum and explain what your flavor is, recomend who and what to read, just chit chat, etc.

I write about lots of different things from different perspectives utilizing different structures and never the same way twice that I am aware of. I am told that Rant suits me and that I could be a Lesbian, but I don't think I've ever done a ranting lesbian pome.

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