Very childish comment below mine...but Great BDSM story
This story just needs a great editor that can help your creative effort flow with ease and astound all of the childish imbeciles that believe negative energy is better than constructive criticism...like the commentator below. Wonderful Start. :)
I always enjoy some constructive criticism, and will submit my next entry to a volunteer editor prior to posting. Please for the other viewers of this story, inform me why you enjoy/did not enjoy my story. Thank you. :)
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this story sucks
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Very childish comment below mine...but Great BDSM story
This story just needs a great editor that can help your creative effort flow with ease and astound all of the childish imbeciles that believe negative energy is better than constructive criticism...like the commentator below. Wonderful Start. :)
Thank You for Your Feedback
I always enjoy some constructive criticism, and will submit my next entry to a volunteer editor prior to posting. Please for the other viewers of this story, inform me why you enjoy/did not enjoy my story. Thank you. :)
I love it!
Personally, I found this story to be very arousing and really enjoyed it.
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