Sensations Escort Services Ch. 01

Strong start, but a little indescriptive at times. Still, really want to see what's next!

learn

Author needs to learn the correct way or term. In the tags and likely the story its wrong as female students are "COEDS" while "co-ed' is used for mix of male/female students. Confusing if done wrong.

Got it

I love to learn, especially from 'coeds.'

I am hooked agin!

Really interested in where this is going and how you are getting there...this is a great start!

Discrete differences

Correction: "Assuming we are discrete (sic) and pleasing, and do our homework on our clients" ==> discreet and pleasing ..

It's a common error. MS Encarta Dictionary advises: Discreet --careful to avoid embarrassing or upsetting others. ... Discrete --Completely separate and unconnected. The adverbs discreetly and discretely are different in the same manner. ('Discrete' appears often in math & science: discrete functions, discrete particles, etc.) And once you understand the difference, you can avoid the error in the future!

I enjoyed your 'Sisters, Friends, and Lovers,' and 'Sensations Escort Services' appears to be off to a fine start. Thanks!

Apologies

.. for my earlier comment, as I must have misread the tabs. I thought I was Sending Feedback, and did not intend to be snarky in public, rather to be flip and encouraging in private.
And thanks again for your writings, SteveW!

Interesting beginnings

Promising start to the story, very hot 3-way girl scene & looking forward to reading about the upcoming adventures. Minor criticism would be the over-use of the word sapphic.