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Realizing a mistake (Owning Up)

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by Magnetron08/21/14

" You win some, you get laid, now do what it do " ~~~ typo or auto-correct?

" Now that its over I can finally see your true blue " ~~~ This is the 3rd poem from you mentioning seeing someone's "true blue" that I've read today. Poetry is about experimenting with phrases and playing with words. If you keep drawing water from the same well, all of your poems will sound like one another.

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