That was so sweet. The story does need some work, but basically you have a great style.
Gaaaaaaaaaaay
that last paragraph coulda been a couple pages longer.
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That was so sweet. The story does need some work, but basically you have a great style.
Gaaaaaaaaaaay
not even bad, but…
that last paragraph coulda been a couple pages longer.
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