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by Anonymous08/19/14

I think I would take some more time and get an editor. You put this togetheruch lije the story. Fast and scared. Slow down and get it right

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by Anonymous08/19/14

Story could be really good. Always proofread, and take time to let the tension build for the reader. Details are a good thing in a story.

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by Anonymous08/19/14

Horny

^ I guessed what your favorite word is.

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