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Meeting in the Car Park

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by Anonymous

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by nikkitta10108/17/14

cheaters

Cheat.

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by Ashesh908/17/14

Sluttishly should have 2 T s Not what you have written :

Slutishly .

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by JWren09/27/14

Tension relieved

All the uncertainties and anxieties of 'blind' cyberspace dating are succinctly phrased. And the relief in the final two stanzas also left me with a warm smile. Thanks.

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by iwillinstructyou10/18/14

captures the erotic

This captures the essential sense of tension, longing and intimacy that makes erotic writing erotic.

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