All Comments on 'Kiss With a Fist'

I pictured Eddie as Marv from Sin City.

Jason Statham, I think.

Good, gritty, hot.

I still like your other stuff more, but that's just me.

"Um where's the fourth wall? Pretty sure it's around here somewhere."

"Nope, LaRascasse vaporized it mid-story. Boom."

I've gotta say, that jarred me big time.

Finally got round to reading some of your work, you have a great way with words. I also like the way your writing is gritty and dark but with romantic twists and I really loved the bit where they start discussing needing to get on with it because they're in the erotic couplings category! did you post on 'authors hangout' about that idea a while back?

Until I got to your little fourth wall joke.

Totally ruined it. I skipped ahead to write this comment and give you 1 star. Why would you ruin a story like that?

I think you could have gone darker, or at least more violent but it was very well done. " broke your jaw once before, spilled your on the floor, broke my leg in return, sit back and watch the bed brun..." Would have loved to read Darcy kicking the stripper's ass! Even though she was a cop.

Now FINISH IT!

5

Yep, she needs to teach idiot Eddie a lesson. She needs to hire a call girl with an STD and pass it on to Eddie, then tell all his friends.

of grinding shattered souls into one another. Again done expertly. I only agree that reaching through the 4th wall did not work well this time. Nevertheless an awesome story.