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Sphere of Chaos Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/20/14

enjoyable

A very good start, lots of question, hopefully the answers will come soon

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by fanfare08/20/14

good start

I am looking forward to see how your story develops and your characters.

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by Anonymous08/21/14

lovely start

need more - please....

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by Profess_to_Profane08/21/14

The second chapter is up! =) Hope you enjoy. I have submitted others, and they are awaiting approval.

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