good but nothing to see it was a lesbian love scene
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Anonymous08/23/14
redlion75 shut the FUCK UP
awesome I'm so wet
by
Anonymous08/24/14
Awesome
Awesome, I'm hard!
by
Anonymous12/05/14
Response to redlion75
Look closer. The narrator says she removed her shirt and bra. If that's not enough add you imagination if really want to exaggerate it. But it's a good short story. Love your work. Still waiting for At last 2!
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Wow.
So very nice. I wish there were more writers like you on this site.
good but nothing to see it was a lesbian love scene
redlion75 shut the FUCK UP
awesome I'm so wet
Awesome
Awesome, I'm hard!
Response to redlion75
Look closer. The narrator says she removed her shirt and bra. If that's not enough add you imagination if really want to exaggerate it. But it's a good short story. Love your work. Still waiting for At last 2!
Beautiful and very very sexy
I love your writing and your lovemaking style--or at least the style you give to your characters. Sexy, sweet and literate. Wow.
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