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Zachary's Dad Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/21/14

SOOOOO.... DAMN HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTT......PLEASE MORE.....!!!!!!!!!

THIS POST..IS DEFINETELY..THE MOST SEX-CHARGED ...ON THIS SITE..IN MONTHS...EXCEPT FOR.... HOT BI DAD/STUD SON ACTION ....NOTHING HOTTER THAN TOTAL MUSCLED STUD BAREFEET WORSHIP..ESPECIALLY SOAKED WITH STUD BALL JUICE....PLEASE TELL US MORE...WITH TOM'S SON...ZACH GETTING IT ON WITH HIS DAD....AND HIS DAD'S BIG MUSCLED BAREFEET...
PERHAPS MOM WILL ARRIVE HOME...SEE WHAT IS GOING ON..ADMIT SHE HAS WANTED TO PLAY WITH TOM AND ZACH... AND GETS INTO THE ACTION...

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by Anonymous08/21/14

There is some really disgusting imagery here. "Warm, slimy tongue?" "Strings of saliva?" It certainly had some hot going on, but I was jarred too far out of the narrative by the yuck factor.

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by Anonymous08/25/14

Enjoyed, but make sure you don't auto capitalize the word Tom, because there was a couple of uses of botTom, which looks a little silly.

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by boyfeet6908/25/14

"Enjoyed, but make sure you don't auto capitalize the word Tom, because there was a couple of uses of botTom, which looks a little silly."

Thank you for your comment. I actually sorta noticed that before I posted it. I corrected some of them, but apparently I missed a few. This was because Thomas' wasn't originally the name of the father character when I first wrote this. He was a bit younger and his name was Matthew Adams, but I made some changes at the last second using this word replacing feature. That's why some words may appear like that.

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