Marley

*****

Five.

could have done less with the cow and more with the mare and her stud.

Damn you write good stuff. Loved the back and forth between them. Real life build up of sexual tension is the best. Ok, maybe not the best, but it's in the top five.

Very Good

What a lead up into the story with the best balance of descriptive detail.
Great story.
Thankyou

Believable

Excellent story, very well written and believable. Thank you

You Never Dissapoint

Loved it. Would love to see more if possible. Maybe a scene with them in the bedroom, or her daddy's reaction to their relationship.

If not, it's still a great story. Looking forward to more of your great tales.

I LOVE IT!!!

This is definitely one of your best stories, Tx.

Well written and passionate.

I hope you'll write another chapter about Bob
giving Marley a solid spanking!!!

XXX

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Very well done, thank you. Now how about chapter two and three and . . .

Great job

Good summer loving but I hope we get to see more of their future or some backstory

great story

they both got what they wanted.
very entertaining. and the mutual teasing was fun.

Beautiful

I loved this story !! Simple and sweet!! Well done!!