Kim & Kate Ch. 01

You need to add the extreme humiliation to tags and to your bio kinks. It is a rather oh yes or hell no kink, and one that will get you flamed. Author notes with specific issues at the start are more helpful than just a 'if you don't like it, too bad' admonishment.

You have a simple, clean way of writing that is well suited to stroke stories. Told from his pov, we don't get much from the wife. However, what is going on in her psyche is what drives this story. It is difficult to accept that this situation is somehow of benefit to the wife if all you give us is 'her panties are wet.'

Good start

I think you're off to a good start. In order to get the most humiliation, and therefore, the best from your story though, she will at some point have to eat Kim's pussy. I would also revisit the sister issue. What greater humiliation than to have a history of an intense sibling rivalry, then be forced to watch your husband fuck said sister, and then clean her up. You certainly started well though. Just take things a bit farther.

Hope kim and Dick get theirs in the end. C'mon lady wake up and take your life back

nice one

good story. pretty well written, although Kim did become Kate in one paragraph near the end. anyhow, 5 stars for sure! looking forward to chapter 2.

Thanks for the feedback

Thank you for the great feedback. Not having any input from Kate's prospective is a problem in this story. That is why I plan on creating a second parallel story to this one told from her prospective.

agree with others

I would love to see the sequel - what's taking so long??? lol

It is well written. I only found one mistake and that is where Kim was Kate but I understood. I can't wait to read when Kate is faced with a nude Kim and must endure more humiliation than she probably wants.

great job 5 stars

I like it being told from the husband's pov , it adds to the point of the kinkiness of a cuckquean fantasy: the husband loves cheating on her and degrading her/watching his other women degrading her. In my opinion, it makes the story hotter. If you do add apov from the wife, I think you should switch back and forth then because both will make it more interesting.. Hope you add second part soon!

great story

Hope you add to it !!