Brownwood: Hedge Funds Ch. 01

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Great story

Been a fan of this site for awhile now. Have to say this author and this story are amongst the best. Can't wait for the next installment!

Honesty

I realize that when ATTEMPTING to re-build trust that there is a strong urge to be totally honest.

But a cheating wife must NEVER admit to the sex with the lover being "better".

If he is hung better, so be it, there's probably no hiding that. But use the old dodge of it being "different" NOT "better"!

Complete and absolute BS.

Besides the MAJOR, make or break issue of trust ( Ch 2:" I knew those things might someday be restored but they'd only be A SHADOW of what they once were."), now when they are having sex....

She gets to remember how he revenge cuckolded her 8 times for every once she did it with not one, but 3 different women, and how HE INITIATED each of these affairs INTENDED to hurt her & which he INTENDED to show her.

While

He gets to remember VIVIDLY how much better she liked sex with her better endowed lover.

Kids or no kids, chances of that marriage surviving: 0.00%

Great start!

He's known for eighteen months. I could not have held that info inside for that long. The author has constructed some very believable characters. Several ways the author can take his story.

This is destined to be a classic

if it continues as good as it started. It was a pure pleasure to read an author with this talent level. I'm sold! I cannot wait to read the rest of the story.

Pretty good opening

It is a very good start for your story. Good job and keep writing.

Doesn't matter whether she tells her husband the lover was better than him or not

He already knows it. Otherwise, she would never have done it again after the first time.

Keeping what he knew to himself was probably pretty rough, but since he didn't have the proof in his hands and needed the time to "lose" all that money anyway, he didn't have much choice. But he was helped to some extent by her self denial of the possibility that he would find out, or else she might have figured out why he stopped making love to her and started revenge fucking her instead.

I would love

for some of the readers and writers on Lit to actually read the book 'Why Women Have Sex'.

Strangely enough, being uncontrollably horny and big dicks aren't anywhere near the top 10 reasons...or even top twenty.

Damn

Excellent beginning. The husband said many things I would have liked to say to my dead cunt wife. I can just imagine what is in those encrypted files. I can't wait...

Five BIG Stars

Loving it

Very well done. An excellent setup. Five stars.

stupid woman

How stupid do you have to be to say he was better then her husband? No sane woman would say this and claim she didnt want a divorce. because saying that almost assures divorce.

Telling him lover was better

Was not just stupid, it's cruel. She says she told the whole truth because she didn't know how much he knew, but there's no way for him to discover that. Plus, she said the physical can't compare to the spiritual bond. She should've taken that to tell hubby simply that hubby was better. Doesn't even have to lie. Instead, she makes it ten times harder for EVERYONE. Dumb bitch.

some times you can be too honest

"full disclosure" goes both ways. When asked, "does this make my rear end look too big?" every husband knows there is no way to answer with a yes and live. In the same manner, the, "was he bigger and better in bed than me?" question must be answered just as tactfully if there is any chance for the marriage to survive. Does the acronym TMI not apply here? Consider them both a form of diplomatically hedging your marital bets.

Now your onto something....

I hope u don't fuck it up.....nice start though..........bill

Emotionally powerful

Congrats. Excellent first chapter. Four out of five. Very emotionally powerful and well written. Two well-rounded main characters. Clever development with the hedging idea.I look forward to the rest of the story.

THE DOOR SWINGS BOTH WAYS

as does one of the partners. TK U MLJ LV NV

Smooth Story so far

The scene is set and the participants are interesting.

my thought

There's only one way to make her feel his pain. Divorce. Custody. End friendly conversation. Move on. Find someone who actually loves you more than their self.

Cheating is selfish. A revenge affair , stupid.
All cheating , begins with self. You cheat yourself before cheating the world.

Research: Big Dick....It's On The List

It's become quite clear in recent years: When women want a one-night stand, they will definitely choose a bigger dick than they would normally have if the choice is there. In other words, if they have a regular boyfriend but are confronted with Mr. Big, then penis-size can definitely become an issue in her choice to go for a one-night stand.

As far as if this same principle applies to cheaters in marriage, I would guess that the answer would have to be "yes". Why assume the wife did not know about her boss's big dick, or about his sexual prowess? If he was a big cheater, as in this story, then rumors would abound.

It's only in recent years of the internet and the proliferation of more salacious media outlets that people have given much thought to big dicks. I know that I can't even remember thinking about it when I was younger. I can't imagine being a young man nowadays, forced into obsessing over his supposedly inadequate dick. God, what a miserable time to grow up!

Thoughts

“Being pursued by an attractive, successful man who respects you,” – And your husband, while not “pursuing” you (he shouldn’t have to!), wasn’t an attractive, successful man who respected you?

“Naturally, I've had to be careful because I didn't want him to suspect where some of those things had come from.” – Why do the wives here always worry about that? He would probably assume they came from the same places his “things” came from: porn, friends, etc.!

Further Thoughts

“The thing that was beginning to wear on me the most though, was the constant advances my boss was making towards me.” – You’ve never heard of “sexual harassment”?

“Now I had to look at my loving husband of fifteen years through different eyes... suspicious eyes.” – And You’ve done NOTHING to cause him to change, right?

“Mark is very well hung and wonderfully skilled in bed” – And you knew that BEFORE you cheated? Not at all likely!

The story is illogical because....

she didn't know that Mark was hung like a horse and a highly skilled lover before she agreed to fuck him so, once she experienced that cock, enjoyed his skills at using it and spent hours sucking on it before and after she fucked him, there's no way on earth that she'd have stopped fucking him in four weeks or probably four years. After four weeks and a steady diet of being filled, thrilled, fucked and satisfied by that skillfully applied cock, conscience would have no part in what she was doing. As long as Mark wanted her, she'd have been hooked on being fucked by him and his 'magic cock' for life.
There's only ONE reason why she never asked for a transfer or left the company... She stayed close to his cock... her back up, in case she ever changed her mind about cheating and letting him back in her saddle. Staying at her job, next to him, was her insurance... HER secret "Hedge Fund".

he did the saame thing I did and that's block your sorry ass anony

nothing to do with balls it has to do with your dumbass comments.

Intense!

5* and I hate the stupid cunt!

I can tell she has screwed over the wrong man! I have a feeling that David seriously fucked the two stupid fuckers that fucked him!

Can't wait for the next one!

One can only assume

that the majority of US males(since most of these tales originate from US authors) are incredibly insecure and under endowed examples of their species. All of the male leads appear to share a common philosophy - that they "own" their mate and that their genital area is personal territory. That may well have been the case in the 18th and 19th centuries when such disagreements were settled in front of the saloon. This is the 21st century (well it is outside US territorial waters at least). Fashions change. So do attitudes. David was told of this affair a month before the confrontation but had managed to hide away ALL their joint assets claiming a disastrous year!!! Really?? The lawyer that Sarah consulted would have straight on to your IRS demanding a thorough investigation. David would have been nailed to the wall. There are no signs that he is anything but a spoilt little brat who had his favourite toy taken away and spat out his dummy (pacifier) as a reaction. And the counsellor treats him as an adult?? I'll still read the remainder but this is a weak start in an overly trite and cliched tale.

Tired of the claim that the cheating spouse loves the other

So effin tired of it. Sarah does not love him as a spouse should. To love someone you need to put the other person first every time. Every. Damn. Time. Always. She did none of this. No forsaking all others, no in good times AND bad, and definitely and absolutely no respect. He will always have to deal with her claim of the other guy being bigger and better, the lack of respect, and the worry that it will happen again. If Sarah is an example of how many people "love" their spouses, it's no wonder there are so many divorces.