This is the first comment I've left, because, after years of reading literotica stories, this is the first one that I found actually interesting (aside from the erotic part). You are a very good writer.
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Anonymous03/25/15
Clever
I don't know that there was anything special about the erotica portion of this story, but the inclusion and characterization of the Driver/Devil character was pretty brilliant. This was a surprisingly humorous (yet strangely disturbing) look at at human relationships.
English
Clever, well written
This is the first comment I've left, because, after years of reading literotica stories, this is the first one that I found actually interesting (aside from the erotic part). You are a very good writer.
Clever
I don't know that there was anything special about the erotica portion of this story, but the inclusion and characterization of the Driver/Devil character was pretty brilliant. This was a surprisingly humorous (yet strangely disturbing) look at at human relationships.
Different
Great premise, thanks.
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